Desolation ~ Chapter 5!
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Comments
Had a rough time with this sentence: "Guess what makes people bad at cultivation and actually attaining higher ranks?" - could use a little rework for clarity.
Monica Alexander
2018-08-30 19:28:51 +0000 UTCWhat do you mean? The baby dungeon will become a minion inside Cal right? A small "mini" dungeon with it's own territory/ floors. Don't tell me Cal's gonna eat the baby...Not the BABY!
Justin Pieratt
2018-08-01 14:58:45 +0000 UTCToilet mode! Poor Dale, he really gets no respect.
grant pflum
2018-07-25 12:41:27 +0000 UTCI feel bad for what may happen to the baby dungeon. I know Cal has to do the things to become powerful, but leave the beh-beh dungeon 'loan. Maybe Cal can incorporate it into himself? Also sad if this little guy has a wisp too. Think of the potential wisp cal! Think. of. the. wisp. Thanks for the read!
IhasaBangBang
2018-07-20 13:36:48 +0000 UTCOooooooh
Leaf
2018-07-20 10:06:10 +0000 UTC
