Desolation ~ Chapter 4!
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Also, I'm curious who the third potential headmaster was, they just stopped at the second option, which I find a bit weird considering they were considering disregarding him since he is in the C-Ranks. Was the other person a lower cultivation? Or was there some other issue they had with them? They decided that really fast.
Phoebe Light
2018-09-14 19:51:23 +0000 UTCAlso on Justin's sentence: [ If they hadn’t only given authority to people with the physical power to back it up, their capital would not have fallen, they wouldn’t have lost have their population in a cataclysmic uprising. ] It seems like it could really use an "and" after the last comma.
Monica Alexander
2018-08-29 05:46:57 +0000 UTC[Amber’s eyelids fluttered as she thought. “How is he supposed to keep the students in line? Let the other teachers?”] Should last sentence be: "Let alone the teachers?" or something to that effect?
Monica Alexander
2018-08-29 05:41:57 +0000 UTCTyler turned his intense stare upon the priest. “Father Richard, I know that this issue is serious for you, but I don’t think you understand quite where some of *us* are standing ... If they hadn’t only given authority to people with the physical power to back it up, their capital would not have fallen, they wouldn’t have lost *half* their population in a cataclysmic uprising...
Justin Pieratt
2018-08-01 14:42:19 +0000 UTCCaught
Fred Lloyd
2018-07-30 21:56:33 +0000 UTCI fought that to.
Fred Lloyd
2018-07-30 21:56:06 +0000 UTCwhen tyler is talking for the first time it should read "where some of US are standing on the issue", no?
Louis Lariviere
2018-07-24 23:10:44 +0000 UTC... a 30% increase in surface essence purity isn't enough for these people? Geez, Cal is right. Ingrates.
Montgomery Box
2018-07-23 12:20:52 +0000 UTCWas the scholar D. Coda Krout? ;)
Nick O'Roonling
2018-07-21 14:21:53 +0000 UTCI wonder what Father Richard was really suggesting when he mentioned saving those people? He's not so naive that he would want to fight the enemy head on the 'honorable' way, regardless of being of the faith.
Leaf
2018-07-19 03:08:52 +0000 UTCCan't wait to see some new sharp and pointy things. Maybe fluffy and frightening? Looking forward to the delve!
IhasaBangBang
2018-07-18 14:59:43 +0000 UTC<3
Dennis Vanderkerken
2018-07-18 14:08:49 +0000 UTC
