Desolation Chapter 1!
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Someone said it would be useful to leave corrections here as they're spotted. Sorry in advance if it's already been done in a more up to date copy. You should take the apostrophe out of "Cat's".
Addie
2018-08-13 11:06:34 +0000 UTC"Sadly, after a large dose of creativity Bob just wanted to paint the dungeon walls, and then he cut off his own ear... " LOL - I needed that this morning :D lol on Grace also - that's hilarious with the cats chasing her all over. When she is talking, I picture her running around bugging people (especially Dale, but anyone else who she feels safe with) nagging them with crazy questions like "Why are you doing that?" - while they're on the toilet or taking a bath or something... Lots of potential for humor :D Sadly, I cannot spend all day reading new chapters, must work so I can feed my poor dog. Looking forward to more later.
Monica Alexander
2018-07-18 16:42:44 +0000 UTCWell Cal is functioning immortal so he can wait as long as he wants to with no dead line
Kian Childs
2018-07-18 05:07:22 +0000 UTCHow did Cal not bind himself with that last promise? Did his law decide not to recognize that oath? He swore it aloud, the same way that he did in book three when he said he was coming for Dani.
Leaf
2018-07-18 03:58:14 +0000 UTCWill do!
Dakota Krout
2018-07-16 14:11:59 +0000 UTCYes it should, thanks! Strange Word grammar
Dakota Krout
2018-07-16 14:11:47 +0000 UTCDammit! I promised myself I wouldn't read these so I could enjoy the next book all at once! But nooooo, I end up just like Orpheus's poor crewmate, I ended up helplessly drawn to my doom. Keep up the great work Dakota!
grant pflum
2018-07-16 13:43:50 +0000 UTC"Dream" Did.. DID YOU JUST. We have it PINNED. Such fan service. People will be Giddy. "I sighed and ordered the Cat’s back to their rooms" Fairly certain it can just be "Cats" ?
Dennis Vanderkerken
2018-07-16 10:33:36 +0000 UTCHow are they getting to the 5th floor? Did a bunch of Mages decide to waltz a lot of people past Manny? Maybe get him super drunk to where he just started throwing up key gems everywhere?
Bob of Doom
2018-07-16 10:27:15 +0000 UTC
