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CC2 Chapter 3!

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Question. Why not have Joe pick up Cartography? It would help with his Dexterity and Intelligence at the very least. It would also up his drawing skill fast enough. Vellum or thin leather squares that are 2x2 feet, ink, and a specialized quill. He could probably even donate them to Boris after a bit, or double check his work through maps in the library.

Warren Elsken

You have 15 twice because it is both 3 and 5. 93-15 = 78. :)

Brian O.

love the cube, but is that math still wrong? 3+6+9+12+15+18 = 63, 5+10+15 = 30, so sum = 93

Mike Johnson

Thank you so much! Probably would have missed those :-)

Dakota Krout

Love it! Two comments: 1. "Cel tapped the table they had sat [down] at with one finger while he thought." I think inserting "down" there will make it easier to understand the use of the past perfect tense. 2. "Joe started reading the each face of the squares [...]" probably should be "Joe started reading each face of the squares [...]" By the way, it's amazing how this already has so few typos and other mistakes in it!

Kai Kuchenbecker

Thank you kind sir!!

Dakota Krout

*"*I was wondering if there was anything you have that will also increase perception... (missed quotation) --- I like the rubix cube too, even though I mentally cursed at the idea of having to train with it. I never figured out how to solve one.

Justin Pieratt

I like the cube idea to gain and grow those areas!

chris marshall

I love this story, but the more I read the more I feel like I'd be an idiot in this game lolol.

Amber Dehn


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