CC2 Chapter 1!
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Nauseous v Nauseated Even though nauseous and nauseated are often used to mean feeling unwell, many purists insist that nauseous means “causing nausea” while nauseated means “feeling sick.” Casually, it is probably OK to use both words to mean feeling ill. However, in more formal situations, use each word correctly. I understand the sentence either way, but it was drilled into my head by teachers to use nauseated and not nauseous when describing feeling sick.
Reed Collins
2018-06-19 21:59:19 +0000 UTCthere was 'no-one' guiding you, so (more succinct)
yankell benavides
2018-05-29 22:53:30 +0000 UTCDeep down though, he knew that when someone 'was' raised as a fanatic and another person 'shattered' their worldview... well... (have to keep the sentence in past tense.).
yankell benavides
2018-05-29 22:52:06 +0000 UTC"There *also was not any* person guiding you, so " (on a side note, as an aspiring transmutationist and professional enchanter, I completely empathize with Joe's plight about showering. If only I could figure out my hygiene enchantment that automatically cleaned a room, its contents, and occupants, life would be so much simpler!)
Justin Pieratt
2018-03-31 15:43:57 +0000 UTCDeep down though, he knew that when someone *was* raised as a fanatic and another person shatters their worldview… well… history *doesn't* show *the shatterer * living a long or happy life
Justin Pieratt
2018-03-31 15:33:23 +0000 UTCThank you kind supporter :)
Dakota Krout
2018-03-21 19:40:52 +0000 UTCYay, another chapter. Here are a couple typos I noticed. In the second sentence "Mage's Collage, an so" should be "and so." In the second to last paragraph should "sometimes weeks or years for higher ranks spells" be "sometimes weeks or years for higher ranked spells?"
Bsoxmk2
2018-03-21 17:14:46 +0000 UTC
