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When he said “Yet it wasn’t the fall that killed you.” the reply should be, "No, it was the stop at the bottom"

His Dad

haha! Yup. Thanks!

Dakota Krout

Thanks for another great chapter :) I quite enjoy Tatum and the restrictions he has

Leaf

Thanks for the chapter! Tatum mentions ‘Building my shine’ , should that be shrine?

Muntu Omnyama

still loving the book, great job

chris marshall

Ah. Finished work, and this chapter, time to go home. Thank you for the chapter, February is starting nicely.

IhasaBangBang

I was wondering that as well

Amber Dehn

:O!

Amber Dehn

"Form here though, you have to decide what to do" should be "From..."?

Jacob Santos

I think there is a mistake with "form" being used instead of "from".

Jacob Santos

i didn’t see it in this chapter but did focusing his healing ability allow it to level proportional to his knowledge?

Fawn Crow


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