CC Chapter 4!
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I think you are missing the word strength in the second sentence of this paragraph describing the states. ---Strength, agility, dexterity, constitution, intelligence, wisdom, charisma, perception, luck, and karmic luck. The tooltips informed him that was the stat that determined how much he could carry and how hard he could hit with weapons or his fists. ---
Bsoxmk2
2018-03-03 19:22:41 +0000 UTCVery juicy chapter. I had a thought about joe from earlier. It took me a second to realize that joe wasn’t being sarcastic and actually had won the lottery after getting disabled and divorced. Possibly too convenient for the story? Still enjoying the concepts so far :)
Leaf
2018-01-23 09:40:50 +0000 UTCCan you give me an example? I'd love to make it more accessible and understandable.
Dakota Krout
2017-12-11 17:53:17 +0000 UTCReally? I'll read through that really quick then.
Dakota Krout
2017-12-11 17:52:22 +0000 UTCSure man ;P
Dakota Krout
2017-12-11 17:51:55 +0000 UTCAlso I have thoughts on phrasing in a couple of places but not sure if you want that kind of feedback/commentary.
Christopher Pride
2017-12-11 03:04:18 +0000 UTCAlso some strong similarities to Awaken Online which are fresh in my head from binging the audiobooks recently. Which is not a bad thing as I quite enjoyed Awaken Online. Though right now some of the stuff like the skill system is nearly identical which makes it feel a little too similar.
Christopher Pride
2017-12-11 03:02:02 +0000 UTCI’m finding the concept for the stats system followable but not cleanly mapping to the numbers.
Christopher Pride
2017-12-11 02:59:20 +0000 UTCGreat!!
Dakota Krout
2017-12-10 18:40:29 +0000 UTCI am liking this. I am guessing we will meet this story's Cal eventually. This character seems ready primed for town building or exploring or pretending to be a NPC. It is hitting all of the good points for me, so I am excited for more.
Jacob Santos
2017-12-10 18:00:05 +0000 UTCThank you for the great stories, and keep on huntin'
IhasaBangBang
2017-12-04 13:32:24 +0000 UTC*Sigh* Well, you got me again. I was holding off on reading these until at least 6 chapters were out but I couldn't wait any longer. Seems I picked a good time to start though. I look forward to the updates and wait with bated breath for the final release.
IhasaBangBang
2017-12-04 13:31:59 +0000 UTCHi all! Please remember that this is the first draft and unedited. I will be making changes as we go, and your suggestions will help shape the world. Feel free to give feedback!
Dakota Krout
2017-11-30 15:06:25 +0000 UTC
