Chapter Nine!
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grant pflum
2017-10-19 00:52:54 +0000 UTCYour wish is my command! Check back soon!
Dakota Krout
2017-10-18 00:35:22 +0000 UTCor any update really, I'm starting to go into withdrawal here!
grant pflum
2017-10-18 00:10:09 +0000 UTCNext chapter please?
grant pflum
2017-10-18 00:05:20 +0000 UTCI do something similar when I lock people in rooms.
Dakota Krout
2017-10-12 15:59:59 +0000 UTCWhy not have a boulder trap where cal activates it manually by removing a connecting piece?
Milo miller
2017-10-12 13:25:38 +0000 UTCWe shall see!! Editing is mandatory!!!
Dakota Krout
2017-10-10 11:59:40 +0000 UTCOut in November, that would be the first of November.... Riiiight?
Xtriver
2017-10-10 07:39:04 +0000 UTC... yes. I am now.
Dakota Krout
2017-10-10 02:00:17 +0000 UTCIt will be in production before the book is released, but the publisher has the final say
Dakota Krout
2017-10-10 01:59:50 +0000 UTCAgreed. You will like the upcoming chapters.
Dakota Krout
2017-10-10 01:58:46 +0000 UTCI love the way you worked in an explanation about the acid plot hole in the digging. You made it seem so natural that the acid solution (pardon the pun) couldn't work that one would never guess that you hadn't thought of it yourself when you first wrote up the part about Cal boring. I also liked the way you are dropping hints about the future trouble Dale could run into with his cheat skills. I can easily picture him developing a full blown dependence on these beast cores given the way they are power leveling him. It could definitely bring a new level of maturity to the story so far and provide some very real consequences for all the short cuts Dale has been able to take with his training. I don't know about others, but I feel that as much as I love watching a MC rapid growth in a story, I think that too much of Dales feats have just been handed to him.
grant pflum
2017-10-10 01:57:38 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! was wondering why we hadn't heard from Dani yet.
chris marshall
2017-10-09 18:46:47 +0000 UTCFree book? This is too nice. How long after the book is released in November will the audible be out? How quick is that process? I hate having to wait a few weeks before getting the audible.
Jacob Santos
2017-10-09 18:03:03 +0000 UTCSo are you going to use bob to voice your patrons in the future? XD
Milo miller
2017-10-09 17:52:58 +0000 UTC
