Chapter five!
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Comments
I like it a lot!
Dakota Krout
2017-09-19 13:02:59 +0000 UTCHow about a dark corridor with a frictionless floor and water pouring in from above. The water starts out freezing and moves towards boiling. There is no light in the corridor and hidden in the water fal are bars or concentrated high pressure water, acting like laser cutters, and changing positions on a timer. Without light it would be almost impossible to see them, plus any light potion would be washed away. Add to that, even if you realised the water saws were there, and you worked out their rotation pattern, you would still risk slipping on the floor as you tried to avoid the either too cold, too hot, or pressurised water. It would be possible to get through it but definitely not easy. If you made it essential to pass through it to get to a boss, and littered the odd pressure trap that activated a lighting bolt to electrify the wet floor, you could have a very fun obstacle course. I know this does not really relate to this chapter but all the talk of tunnelling down to the magma mantle reminded me of how fracking is done with pressurised water which in turn reminded me of Cal's interest in Madams water technique in the dungeon battle of the Wailing War.
Mr IHHI
2017-09-19 12:50:00 +0000 UTCThank you all for your feedback thus far! I'm loving seeing your thoughts so keep them coming! Also, thank you to my latest supporters Josh Border, James M Crump, Keith Miller, Nick, Branden Meyers, Domnom, Tim McGowen, and Zertreix ~ADM. Ya'll rock!!
Dakota Krout
2017-09-17 19:07:37 +0000 UTCSlow down Satan.
Jacob Santos
2017-09-17 04:51:33 +0000 UTCMake a trap where more dangerous and hostile versions of the bugs get shot at people.
Milo miller
2017-09-16 23:47:21 +0000 UTCYeah, that is what I am thinking. It would be neat if in future books this is referenced in some way, other than the obvious searching for the wisp Dani. Just some tavern owner hiring some adventures to clear out the basement of the spiders.
Jacob Santos
2017-09-15 20:49:02 +0000 UTCPersonally, I am worried about the sheer suitability of the new bugs. If Cal really made it so they can thrive in all environments, I can't help but think that they will eradicate their normal counterparts and take over the world. It will be like Japanese beetles in north america just, you know, with flying venomous spiders the size of cockerspaniels. No way that can go wrong.
grant pflum
2017-09-15 12:59:43 +0000 UTCYes combine them into a single chapter.
chris marshall
2017-09-14 23:51:41 +0000 UTCI have to say that I agree and while I was initially indifferent to Bob, I am liking his style and the goblins.
Jacob Santos
2017-09-14 15:41:05 +0000 UTCFlying big ass spiders
Keith Miller
2017-09-14 14:20:03 +0000 UTCI worry about the impact the new insect will have. If it doesn't seek to harm humans, then what does it eat, if anything? I can imagine and laugh at the spiders taking residence in homes on the mountain and people noping the fuck out of there. Regardless, it seems like the environment now has fucking big ass spiders to contend with.
Jacob Santos
2017-09-14 13:48:10 +0000 UTCBob was funny!!!
David Thompson
2017-09-14 13:11:11 +0000 UTCThanks guys! Also, feel free to let me know if you see any errors or stuff you don't like!
Dakota Krout
2017-09-14 13:06:59 +0000 UTCLoved the new mob
Joel Magnuson
2017-09-14 13:05:56 +0000 UTCGreat!!!
David Thompson
2017-09-14 13:00:27 +0000 UTC
