Tifa animation test render - FEEDBACK

So long as she gets destroyed (read as "loved") all will be well :D

Dozzy

Agreed. Hands behind her back would be better

MilktyThumbs

バガボンドX

The fingertip play is actually super hot 😍😍😍😍😍

I agree. Senpai please!

Bunag

some sucking and licking would look nice ^_^ I love the animation. can't wait for the final animation improvements!

MysticXcore

If I'm correct in assuming the idea is to replicate her Remake model, her eyes should be bigger and rounder, and maybe with more red.

MisterMilkster

Some moisture would go a long way in selling the scene. Right now, it looks a little strange that she can glide her fingers over dry skin like that. Otherwise, good work! Excited to see the rest.

I would say clearer eye contact. Her eyes are mostly closed for the ending duration.

Cheeks have a bit too sharp of an intake during the kiss/pucker. The squinting eyes get more hate than I'd say is necessary, I would however have then open up and/or close completely during the course of the animation since it does grab slot of attention as you notice it seeming unnatural.

Drakgurka

just dont let the hand blocking the view of face too much will be fine

qfung

So hot! What amazes me the most is quality of the textures, they are impecable!

I saw the screenshot for it and thought she was holding on her cowboy hat and all of a sudden it was 1000% more sexy, but alas its just something round behind her. A chair maybe? You should totally give her her cowboy hat and be holding it on instead of having her other hand just gripping something off screen.

Charlie

Finger tips part is a bit unnatural looking. If you could substitute it with a cheek play with drool this would be perfect ;)

Porky Ham

I have to agree the cheeks sucking in too much make her lips look a bit off. I think a simple lip pucker will get the idea across just as well. The fingering of the tip towards the last half could use some tweaking. Possibly slow it down and smooth out the twitchiness of her fingers to give it more of a "massaging" feel. Is it possible to see a version with her looking at the camera the whole time instead of a dazed look?

Feyrhel

I Like it. The bit at the end seems a little to quick IMO and there shoulod also be some moisture otherwise rubbing the head dry is king of rough.

Always86

I concur with John about the cheek thing, just al little too sucked in

Darius Willits

gotta be honest, whenever she does that kiss like pose with her lips, her cheeks look weird. like they are sucked in too much.

John doh

Yeah it looks great so far, just would say that she should have a better grip of the penis in some spots but also showing off the nails in others.

TifaLockhartfan69

idk anything about animation but I’d prefer her eyes to be closed/open completely. The eyelashes feel weird to me if they stay half open like that

Adrian Jelserry

My only feedback is the way she’s holding onto the penis. She should be stroking it with her whole hand, not her finger tips. It almost looks like she’s trying to be extra careful as if it’s fragile. I’m assuming you’re trying to show off her finger nails which is why it’s like this. It just looks a little ‘unnatural’ is all. Aside from that, this animation is near perfect/flawless. EDIT: Wait, I just watched the .mp4. Assumed the gif was it. In the video, I can see she’s gripping it more which is exactly what it should look like!! Never mind. Now the only thing is her eyes should be closed/open completely in the moments where it looks like she’s squinting. Sort of like what Adrian is saying below. I also am not a fan of her pressing her finger nail on the tip. Kinda strange

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