CH51 Part 2
Added 2025-04-09 22:52:49 +0000 UTCUpdate: See the last scene of the chapter. This ties up the religious scene perfectly and answers your questions and solves your confusion.
The language difference was meant to evocate that the septons speak differently compared to normal folk, heavily influenced in the formal manner of the Seven-Pointed Star.
Update: Removed the typo hahaha.
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UPDATE: See the scene that caused the biggest block. I'm about half ish in the last scene (Polaerys) which will come tomorrow (I also have public holiday tomorrow)
Hopefully you will find your patience having been worth it.
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Hello all,
please see the next post (not a full chapter). It's about half of CH51 part 2 (the next scene is a religious one with the fourth scene being one of Polarys) which isn't ideal but it is something (I would have preferred to post the full chapter which probably would have been friday - which is also when I will post the last parts of the chapter part 2 - but I couldn't ask you guys to wait that long)
In any case, I hope you guys like this anyway.
Comments
Ok now that Part 2 is completed, I can leave a review. Its nice to see Unsullied Rheagar again after a very long time, it looks like he was part of the Unsullied that decided to remain with Aegon under Elamaerys rule. I look forward to seeing how this occupation of Oldtown will go, something tells me that someone will end up doing something stupid and the Elamaeri army will have bring the hammer down hard. The scene with Helena was also well done. It looks like Helena and her children will be moving to Elamaerys and becoming part of House Targaryen of Elamaerys. I am curious is Helena and her children can bond with dragons again, given that their previous dragons are dead. That is one question that no one has every really answered, a dragon can have another rider if the previous rider is dead but it was never made clear if a Dragonlord can claim another dragon if their dragon died. Also what does the edict of House Targaryen of Elamaerys say about Helena and her children having dragons? I am curious to learn as to why the Old Gods and the Children of the Forest are afraid of Aegon, what god/power is actually behind Aegon. I am curious if you will reveal it at the end of this story. I can understand why the religious scene was difficult for you to write and gave you a lot of trouble. I was curious as to what presence Aegon felt in the Stary Sept but then Polaerys scene revealed a theory regarding what it is. The scene with Polaerys was well done. I guess that Aegon will not be standing again Lys taking over Tyrosh but actively helping them do so, in order to throw Essos into more chaos and give Elamaerys time to assert its dominance over the Sunset Sea and stop Westeros and Essos from being able to challenge them. I'm guessing that Elamaerys is going to be involved in a lot of cloak and daggers to keep Westeros and Essos focused on their "known world" so that Aegon and his descendants can become a super power without any interference. If Polaerys is right regarding the seven gems in the statues of the seven in the Stary Sept then I get the feeling that Aegon is going to want to claim them for Elamaerys and take them back with him to Elamaerys so that he can figure them out and unlock more secrets of magic. Looking forward to the next chapter on Monday.
Sukhraj Singh
2025-04-19 07:37:21 +0000 UTCyou might have to refresh and redownload as well. You already have a yesterdays copy with the same name.
Mosef
2025-04-18 23:31:28 +0000 UTCIt’s only up to pg48 on pdf
Hadsan Ali
2025-04-18 23:29:27 +0000 UTCI can only only see up to page 48 still on the pdf ☹️
Coconut mango
2025-04-18 23:07:13 +0000 UTC“…they were aware that Penis has been gnashing at the state of things…” - PDF, pp. 50
Moronic_Dishpit
2025-04-18 23:04:31 +0000 UTClol, typo. 'as whilst their information from the other cities were not as great as they were in Lys, they were aware that "Penis" (pentos?) has been gnashing at the state of things,'
helljumper aka MA
2025-04-18 23:01:17 +0000 UTCThe inner monologue was done because of how I imagine the seven-pointed star is written. It is formal, with different ways of speaking, and the Septons who study it cannot help but speak in the same way. And I thought it was something worth showing. Because I'm stubborn. I imagined these scenes as part of part 2 so therefore it needs to be part of it. As you can see, the third scene without the context of the fourth, makes it difficult.
Mosef
2025-04-18 22:52:47 +0000 UTCIt is still a scene I guess…perhaps like a slice of life. Not everything has to be an accomplishment (or failure) I suppose 🤷♂️
Coconut mango
2025-04-18 16:07:09 +0000 UTCI'm also confuse of the religion part within the chapter, its intention or purpose.
Real_Proster
2025-04-18 09:22:56 +0000 UTCthe inner monologue of the septon to be honest was hard to follow maybe bcz it was different style of writing then u usually have. but seeing the religious part i could understand why it took u some time as u have covered the emerging schism in faith from both sides quite aptly. Though i dont get why dont u mark these as new chapters as length wise they are having enough content and can be read seperately from previous parts
Lazybeep
2025-04-18 03:47:34 +0000 UTCi think it was a move to gain legitmacy and stop the septons from doing anything rash in his absence
Lazybeep
2025-04-18 03:43:01 +0000 UTCI understand the mental block...that being said I don't know what Aegon wanted to accomplish here with the Starry Sept and what was accomplished here 🤷♂️ Perhaps the block was the struggle to find the purpose for this segment?
Coconut mango
2025-04-18 00:32:30 +0000 UTCThanks!
YUL07
2025-04-17 22:40:33 +0000 UTCI feel like he's just going to fold the rest of part 2 into part 3.
Yesman
2025-04-16 00:25:19 +0000 UTCAnother delay? I’m assuming part 3 will also be delayed?
Luci alarri
2025-04-15 22:16:18 +0000 UTCIt's Wednesday yet still no update, he's cooking something good for this
Real_Proster
2025-04-15 19:00:57 +0000 UTCTuesday
Mosef
2025-04-13 20:25:49 +0000 UTCTuesday. Half done right now
Mosef
2025-04-13 20:25:27 +0000 UTCTuesday is the aim. About half done
Mosef
2025-04-13 20:25:08 +0000 UTCYes. I'm not religious or all that well versed in heresy and ecclesiastical stuff and debates but I'm Learning! (I won't try religious schism again unless it's really about religious schism
Mosef
2025-04-13 20:24:54 +0000 UTCPart 2?
Thomas Buckley
2025-04-13 07:24:03 +0000 UTCDid the religious portion of part 2 cause the delay?
Lers
2025-04-13 04:33:30 +0000 UTCWon't there be an update for the missing part?
YUL07
2025-04-12 02:59:35 +0000 UTCObligatory: Are we doing part 2 of part 2 today still? 😅
Coconut mango
2025-04-12 00:12:46 +0000 UTCThanks for giving us Helaena's perspective! Now, I have a question: won't the section coming out tomorrow include the encounter in King's Landing? Will Aegon's battle with the Kraken be one of the seven miracles mentioned earlier? Damn, I'm getting more and more anxious to read it...
YUL07
2025-04-10 20:57:14 +0000 UTCHelena is always one of the most tragic figures no matter what version. I love that you brought up the fact or at least imply in your story that she's on the spectrum and really was taken advantage of by the greens. I also really HATE that there is a possibility that she was straight up raped in cannon and maybe in this story, by Aegon due to not understanding or even wanting to have sex. Honestly as much as I want to blame a lot of what Alicent does on Otto's influence. She basically pimped out her daughter the exact way Otto did to her.
Jordan
2025-04-10 14:16:23 +0000 UTCPoor Helaena… hard life. I say let Oldtown burn.
Felipe Astur
2025-04-10 14:11:37 +0000 UTCEhh now don't get me wrong I don't like her she is a massive hypocrite. But her father pimped her out when she was.... I think like 15 or 16 in cannon and basically brainwashed her the entire time that she and her children weren't safe. Do I think she should go free noooooo way,but maybe just not execute her.
Jordan
2025-04-10 14:11:23 +0000 UTCHe MIGHT and I only say that because in cannon Alicent did live past the dance. She was absolutely miserable, but that honestly might be the one way to convince Baelon.
Jordan
2025-04-10 14:08:45 +0000 UTCIt seems that Oldtown is still a powderkeg, even after a failed revolt, I'm not sure how Aegon can keep it under control without a present dragon rider. Heleana is so precious, loved her POV. However, I don't think Aegons going to be able to save Alicent from her fate (good riddance) with Baelon. Total Hightower death.
Yesman
2025-04-10 13:15:59 +0000 UTCWell I for one hold Alicent as one the main parties responsible for the dance and hope she is not spared…despite Helena being so lovable and naive in her request
Coconut mango
2025-04-10 06:14:23 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter and I’m really glad you posted today. So happy you got to see Aegon and Helena talk as she out of all of her family did not deserve her fate as well as her children. I’m curious what Aegon going to do with her children, as I wouldn’t recommend them being married into his family right away as that might cause some problems going forward with there blood being Hightower. Also hearing about their dead dragons is a stab to the heart to hear as her childern didn’t even get a chance to ride them before they died and most likely won’t get another chance to claim another dragon or egg. Again thanks for the post.
Dragonslayer29
2025-04-10 00:08:23 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. It’s great we had an outlook on Helaena and how she and the children are doing. P.s I didn’t know Aegon’s beard is that long lol. I always imagined him having only a chin beard.
Skruffy
2025-04-09 23:47:56 +0000 UTCSecond
Alexsander Marins
2025-04-09 22:56:29 +0000 UTCThank you so much we are hungry for your great story 😊
Marco Belina
2025-04-09 22:56:06 +0000 UTCYes! 😍
YUL07
2025-04-09 22:53:21 +0000 UTC
