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CH39 Part 2

Hello Everyone,

Please see the next chapter!

Apologies about the long wait - I hope this chapter makes it worth it!

Comments

Yes this is a good assessment. Unfortunately, Aegon is 100% zeroed in on the old gods.

Mosef

Will post it in the next update

Mosef

Dragons are easier to make so yes, I can do this. Will work on it this weekend

Mosef

Just an update to allow the next tier access

Mosef

Killing Otto might be a huge mistake and instead of slowing down the civil war might make the Greens think Rhaenyra had him killed. Then Aegon would be directly responsible for all the death that follows

Joles

hi Mosef117 what are the names of all current alive dragons and there riders

Amit Efraim

Are you gonna post pictures of the dragons and their riders? Like how you did in you HP story being able to put a face to a name is always helpful. As always nice chapter

Jan

Was there an edit? I randomly got an email about this chapter an hour or two ago.

Master of Bunnies

Bomber Harris!!! Do it again!

Yesman

Right?? Seriously, with Dragons (and of course supporting people who can prep things and all) you can completely bring your enemies into submission without even having to use their dragonflame. Dragon Blitz!! It was fun writing it haha (abstractly of course...bombing civilian centres is bad! *waggles finger*)

Mosef

Numenor would be cool asf. With ASOIAF people being insane builders, I can see them being able to pull it off too haha. The Aegon and Maegelle scene is my favourite in this chap as well. In a way, she's his therapy. Her innocence, the bond they're forming, everything...its helping with the PTSD he definitely has. I'm glad you liked it! :)

Mosef

Aegon will definitely try a lot. He hasn't been a neglectful father before and if anything, after everything, you can see him trying to lean hard in creating bonds with his family.

Mosef

I've tried making a city using the few city building maps but none of them felt right! AI doesn't really work properly either, especially the pics I had generated. It's really annoying haha. I will try over the next few weeks to see if I can get something working

Mosef

Definitely needs therapy. He won't get it, of course, but he will have to do something to normalise.

Mosef

Damn thx for the chapter, also dude need therapy. Also I like that u make Aegon much more human compared to other si fics.

Duy

I guess Braavos and their assassins can be the counter balance to the red faith/Volantis coalition.

Coconut mango

Ahhhh the cliffhanger…..anyway, thanks for the chapter. Is it possible to have an illustration on what the city looks like. Like what the grand buildings look like, city layout and their Targaryen branch banner(I forgot what it look like). Oh yeah could you also post an index with the family tree and their dragons.

Skruffy

Poor solonys, I hope he and aegon are able to reconnect and build a relationship

Hello

Hate and love that you left it at a cliff hanger. This chap was awesome glad to see more of what is being built. I really get a Numenor vibe with how Eleameys is being built. But my favorite part was with Aegon and Maeglle. The scene where he cries holding her was just excellent and shows that he how tired he is of war and just wants to go home. The scene just shows that even though he is a magic wielding dragon rider and leader of powerful nation he still human. So thanks for the chap it was well worth the wait.

Dragonslayer29

Habsburg moment

Yesman

George definitely ate something unique to cook up something like the Targs. Especially the family line.

KAZUHA02

Its ok! The Targs are a circle...sometimes its better to forget...LOL

Mosef

Damn you for the cliffhanger!!! Out of all the things I expected Aegon to do to eliminate New Ghis as a threat, I didn't expect him to simply turn Misaragorn into a B-52. Great chapter as always!

Yesman

I feel stupid now...:embarrassed look:

KAZUHA02

This chap leaves me hungering for the big reunion:) great work

Kunta

Because Vaegon is Gael's brother...:awkward look:

Mosef

Isn't Vaegon Aegon's uncle? So technically he should be Polaerys' granduncle, so why is Polaerys' calling Vaegon his uncle?

KAZUHA02


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