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CH19 Part 1 - Tartered Dragon

Hello All, please see the next chap (Part 1) of Tartered Dragon. Could only get about 7.5k finished (3 or 4 scenes outstanding which will probably take take the chap to 20k).


Please enjoy and let me know what you think!

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He does but he expected the sealord to lived longer plus the son not being the wastrel he is.

Mosef

Does corlys know that sealord title is not hereditary it chosen by the magisters and keyholders of the Braavos and the chances of the current sealord son becoming sealord Is small as the guy has been said to be an idiot and i doubt any of the Braavosi would vote for him.

Mark

Friday night today perhaps?

Duy

Mate, fuck Thursday, I love Friday. Take a smoke mate, enjoy a well done weekend. EDIT: don’t actually smoke, smoking is bad.

Robolo42

There'll be a westeros focus in chap 21. After chapter 23, There'll be more regular Daemon, Corlys, Rhaenyra, Baelon povs

Mosef

Slight delay. Trying for thursday.

Mosef

Wait isn’t that the premise for the books? So it will take place around book time or later?

Robolo42

Im curious about what Daemon thinks of Aegon

Kaizer

Very nice chapter, I don't think Aegon will appreciate Westerosi families trying to tie him to Westeros.

Yesman

Thanks for the chapter. I really like the interactions of Aegon and his children.

GooseElite

Chapter 19 should be posted on Sunday-Monday :)

Mosef

Will continue the story but itll be set in around the time of the war for the dawn, centuries later after this story ends. Though the last two chapters will be post Aegons death

Mosef

Ah I see what Aegon is doing, he is basically making his family the ruling family with governing body basically being the Targaryen family and whatever system of goverment they implement, the Archon might rule but he also delegates powers to the rest of his family, so the entire Targaryen family has power and say in ruling their new nation but the title Archon is passed from father to the eldest son. Also, it looks like Corlys wants to marry Laena to Castory, though I am not sure if Aegon will agree due to the huge age difference. I mean Gael if 4 years older that Aegon which is not much of an issue as they grow older but Laena is almost a decade older than Castory. I guess we will just have to wait and see, one of Aegon's sons is definitely going to marry Breannei as Aegon wil not allow dragons to be held by those not within the Targaryen family tree. Will you be posting Cahpter 19 part 2 soon?

Sukhraj Singh

I liked it. It’ll be real funny if Corlys shows up after the exodus. Really enjoyed the father son conversation as well. I know just like he said, Aegon isn’t dying anytime soon but do you have plans to continue this story after his lifespan?

Lictor Magnus

Nice thx for the chap

Duy

Thank you for the chap. I’m curious on what Aegon is going to do with Corlys offer of Leana as that comes with a lot of pros and cons in general. So can’t wait for the next chapter to see what you decide.

Dragonslayer29


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