Tartered Dragon - CH11
Added 2023-07-30 20:58:02 +0000 UTCHello everyone!
Please see the next chapter of Tartered Dragon!
#NOTE: This was edited 08.10.23: Changes made: Minor - removal of references to the common folk knowing that the ships went West.
NOTE: This was edited on 26.08.23
Please see the amended version of chapter 11 of Tartered Dragon. Most of the changes were minor (like changing the age of the children).
We can now move ahead with the story. Thank the Seven!
Comments
Alert for earthquakes? :d
Syknox
2023-08-05 15:20:43 +0000 UTCSaerra is the whore daughter that escaped Westero
Mosef
2023-08-05 09:03:14 +0000 UTCJust the one for now. The hound whilst loyal also has a particular practical purpose
Mosef
2023-08-05 09:02:24 +0000 UTCDoes Aegon and Gael's family now have bunch of loyal hounds by their side now? Remember reading that in the previous chapter that they were raising a dog to keep their kids company like with the Starks and their direwolves.
Master Zen
2023-08-04 18:19:57 +0000 UTCThings are starting to get worse for house Targaryen and I'm very invested in what will happen next and I wonder with Aegon and Gael not intending to return any time soon and their view on Viserys not paying heed to advice why won't they just be blunt with Viserys and spell it all out to him the situation and all the mess he is causing even if he won't listen they had at least tried then. It would also be interesting if Aegon dropped in for a surprise visit to speak with Rhaenyra give some sage advice and some family support or something or Rhaenyra making a surprise visit herself to Aegon would also be interesting too. After reading the chapter I hope that the kids would have family look out for them, hate to see them turn against each other due to Viserys bad decision and who is Saerra again? tried googling her but nothing came up.
Master Zen
2023-08-04 17:37:19 +0000 UTCThat's good, I asked because I searched for maps to see if there was anything West, and while fandom maps do have a continent West its not present in official maps, still I am confident that whatever you do is going to be good, also super hyped to see what it will look like!
Zulfy
2023-08-04 11:43:54 +0000 UTCI actually have maps at the ready too that I will unfold over time!
Mosef
2023-08-03 23:15:04 +0000 UTCOne thing you have to consider is....how similar is Planetos to Earth? What is Sothoryos? What kind of analog is Essos? What kind of analog is Westeros? In that sense....it kinda start making sense that he saw enough about the western cost of Sothoryos which is very similar to another continent ;).
Mosef
2023-08-03 23:14:39 +0000 UTCyou're right
Mosef
2023-08-03 23:12:59 +0000 UTCI have finally caught up with this, and while I am still a bit miffled with the whole Gael situation the results aren't that bad so nothing to say about it. I am however curious about what landmass Aegon is talking about, from the official maps there is nothing West of the Summer Isles so I assume its your invention, this new country that Aegon will found does intrigue me. I am also wondering if the official faith there will be inspired by the story he told Gael a while back, perhaps have Eru Ilúvatar as the main God? The story does line up perfectly since it talks about Seven Gods being born from him, a flame whch might be Rh'llor without even talking about the Old Gods and song theme that line very well with the setting of George.
Zulfy
2023-08-03 20:33:29 +0000 UTCGreat chap can’t wait to see the next. I wonder what you will call this new land and how big it will be.
Dragonslayer29
2023-07-31 11:01:42 +0000 UTCI hope that Mc will the only one to have access to the land in west summer islands. So he could crown himself king. A kingdom away from Westeros.
Sefa Baah
2023-07-31 01:27:21 +0000 UTCIt seem that his soldiers were getting restless, so he sent them there. To rest of wide world will think that he was helping his brother with his war.
Sefa Baah
2023-07-31 00:42:22 +0000 UTCI think this is the first asoiaf story I’ve read where the MC decides to just get away from Westeros and Essos all together.
Lictor Magnus
2023-07-31 00:37:29 +0000 UTCWhy did Aegon send soldiers to the stepstones?
Felipe Astur
2023-07-31 00:03:48 +0000 UTCNever wake the sleeping Dragon 🐉
Sefa Baah
2023-07-30 23:38:07 +0000 UTCFreaking Viserys….
Felipe Astur
2023-07-30 23:21:43 +0000 UTCBeen checking all morning for this, cheers!
SwiftFate
2023-07-30 21:08:06 +0000 UTC
