CH8 Tartered Dragon
Added 2023-07-02 16:54:11 +0000 UTCA few changes on CH8.
Edit: a few grammar and a few sentence changes.
Edit 2: removal of obsolete chapter 9
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He was allowed to stay in court for some time after his impressive abilities
Mosef
2023-07-09 18:52:28 +0000 UTCAlthough it´s not the changes that I imagined I´m kind of glad that the story stayed true to what you wrote without changing things to much and it´s great that you made Gael´s love for Aegon less superficial and that the things that she did came from a place of hurt and not knowing what to do in such a situation than her just hooking up with this random stranger. Then again it all boils down to that dastardly bard! How did he even get so close to her anyway!?
Master Zen
2023-07-04 01:33:26 +0000 UTCHeard there were changes and I was hoping that it was that Aegon would have been able to find her before that dastardly bard did anything or that Gael came to her senses and went on a journey/adventure instead before going back home. I kind of imagined that Aegon found Gael somehow and he returned with her in a princess carry and everybody would be flabbergasted, lol.
Master Zen
2023-07-04 01:18:42 +0000 UTCYeah, its kinda complicated. It kinda falls into but not really. :D I mean he loves her and she loves him but she had so much sex with some random guy that she got impregnated by him and now MC will rise kids as his. So I guess it depends how person is looking at it, for someone it could be NTR and for other it does not have to be that...
FangRu
2023-07-02 18:32:04 +0000 UTCRight. Which didnt happen? And it's pretty unhealthy to think someone stole someone else where there is no formal love recognition. Now cheating is another thing but again, nothing was formalised in anyway
Mosef
2023-07-02 18:27:25 +0000 UTCIt basicaly means "cuckoldery" where girl that MC loves is "stolen" by someone else and have sexual relations with her...
FangRu
2023-07-02 18:19:50 +0000 UTC
