CH85
Added 2023-04-30 21:03:47 +0000 UTCHello Everyone, please see the next chapter of Odyssey!
Edit: some corrections regarding names and also some changes in page 30 with regards to Ravenite numbers!
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a treasure hunt for magical artifacts side story pending?
Master Zen
2023-05-14 13:49:46 +0000 UTCHe won't :)
Mosef
2023-05-13 20:09:57 +0000 UTCWill atticus seal his magic growth? I hope he doesnβt. Love the story
Matthew18273645
2023-05-11 23:14:03 +0000 UTCShapeless ones are the precursors. The ones who control the universe and treat it like it is their sandbox and everyone and everything is their toys to play with
Mosef
2023-05-06 21:42:12 +0000 UTCWhat are the shapeless ones? Are they the ones who run the domain(after life)
matt sinco
2023-05-05 22:04:10 +0000 UTCThis Jason looks like the kind of guy whose mindset is fixed on magicals being the devil spawn and would chalk it all up to them being evil. HereΒ΄s to hoping that there will a Belmont or Hellsing kind of like family in this organization it would be quite interesting to know that the muggles arenΒ΄t completely helpless against magicals.
Master Zen
2023-05-04 23:08:41 +0000 UTCScourers? If so, then things are getting interesting π€
Hadrian Tempest
2023-05-01 23:05:03 +0000 UTCYou did great π I especially liked that basically both sides were polish to some extent (even if the brainwashed hunter was of polish decent only). And 'Babcia' was quite reasonable when it came to the whole thing, I like to think that poles are generally quite reasonable π Thanks again for mentioning my country, it was really nice to read about it π
Hadrian Tempest
2023-05-01 22:57:31 +0000 UTCI'm glad you liked the representation in the story! I try to be fair when it comes to countries (and try to show some respect).
Mosef
2023-05-01 21:20:56 +0000 UTCNot quite illuminati! There's actually hp lore about the group
Mosef
2023-05-01 21:19:41 +0000 UTCOh nyoo! It's the muggle illuminati!! π§
ProtagNeptune
2023-05-01 01:45:39 +0000 UTCAs always, excellent work π π I enjoyed the science part but the promise of more spaceship action in the future is getting me truly excited πβ¨οΈAlso, as a Pole myself, I appreciate mention of my country in such a positive light π keep up the good work π
Hadrian Tempest
2023-04-30 23:00:54 +0000 UTC
