Ammortamento CH1 & CH2
Added 2023-02-12 16:27:33 +0000 UTCHello all,
Please see the amended first chapter of Ammortamento and the second also!
Story Synopsis:
Michael died in a dusty part of Sicily with a heart broken and regret haunting him in every waking hour. Instead of being subjected to God's Judgment, he instead finds himself reborn in strange new world with a fresh start, though not all was well.
A choice once made will be made once more even if Michael knew God was testing him. After all, Michael never turned away when family was endangered.
Note: The story is a Michael Corleone reincarnation story in the 1970s born to Charlus and Dorea Potter. This is a Michael Corleone directly after his death in The Godfather Part III.
Comments
Working on it. Next post will be The Tartered Dragon then Odyssey then this. Whilst I could post the next chapter sooner if I work on it now, I'd rather not as I'm writing out as much as I can about the chapter structures
Mosef
2023-04-01 07:36:11 +0000 UTCBro update this amazing piece please
Lord Mehmeh
2023-04-01 03:30:31 +0000 UTCPosted on Spacebattles, very very few actually were interested. My stories rarely get any interest there so I'm more or less uninterested in posting more there. Alternate - most of the stuff posted there tends to ASOIAF so not sure if it'll be of much interest there
Mosef
2023-03-06 18:06:59 +0000 UTCMichael Corleone's story will definitely be all about Earth :)
Mosef
2023-03-06 18:05:38 +0000 UTCand and if you havent, you should post this on spacaebattles and alternatehistory forum. Also make sure you make it clear that its an insert of Michael Corleone from the GodFather. Write it on the title or something. They would love it i think. If you havent anyway...
Corlys
2023-03-04 06:49:06 +0000 UTCplease continue master, maybe this one wouls be focusing on how to survive on earth instead of the skies like Odyssey did?
Corlys
2023-03-04 06:47:00 +0000 UTCThat'll be the hope!
Mosef
2023-02-21 23:55:47 +0000 UTCAnd more importantly I wana see what the God father would do to Dumbledore when he leaves harry with abusive muggles.
Wanous
2023-02-14 07:16:14 +0000 UTCMaybe James won't be such a little shit
Wanous
2023-02-14 07:13:57 +0000 UTCReally like this, could probably read all night if there would be more chapters..
Jones
2023-02-13 23:22:03 +0000 UTCLol was of FFn and saw one review that went OH SHIT THIS IS FROM THE GUY WHO WROTE ODYSSEY! MUST READ!
Nicogen
2023-02-13 07:38:42 +0000 UTCHe doesn't show extraordinary talents of either the blacks or potters. The potters have naturally quick reflexes and talent in transfiguration (potters) whilst the blacks are naturally excellent in dark magicks and duelling. Michaels strength are curiously in runes and arithmancy though he isn't too shabby in most forms of magicks. It gets explored a little as time goes ob
Mosef
2023-02-12 23:05:14 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. I was wondering if he replaced James or not, nice to see the little guy having an elder brother. So he doesn't possess the talents of house black or potter? That's unfortunate
Yeno Memevig
2023-02-12 19:42:59 +0000 UTCThanks
Sefa Baah
2023-02-12 16:43:41 +0000 UTCadded
Mosef
2023-02-12 16:43:18 +0000 UTCSorry but what is story about... I couldn't find any general summary about this...
Sefa Baah
2023-02-12 16:32:30 +0000 UTC
