Ammortamento Prologue (snippet)
Added 2023-01-01 20:06:18 +0000 UTCHello guys, please see prologue of the next story I'm working on (hoping to get the first chapter complete by end of this week).
The story is a Michael Corleone reincarnation story in the 1970s born to Charlus and Dorea Potter.
This is a Michael Corleone directly after his death in The Godfather Part III.
PS: Odyssey will be published Wednesday this week.
Comments
This is amazing mate. I hope you continue this. This has superb potential
ghosthammer
2023-01-05 06:55:45 +0000 UTCThis storyline over everything please!
Hanzo95
2023-01-05 03:17:37 +0000 UTCThis has the potential to be something great. Never seen a concept like this where Godfather is used like this.
LuciferSatan
2023-01-03 08:11:55 +0000 UTCFleamont is the elder brother in this fic. I played with the notion of having charlus as the elder but decided to stick to canon (with the exception of making charlus James' uncle when he probably was more like a second or third cousin in canon)
Mosef
2023-01-02 14:41:37 +0000 UTCInteresting start.
GooseElite
2023-01-02 08:20:54 +0000 UTCI think the difference is Atticus know the plot of the potterverse and made plans. If I'm remembering timelines right the Godfather series took place long before any of the HP books or movies came out. Meaning for Micheal this is a new unscripted world/reincarnation.
Wanous
2023-01-01 22:06:42 +0000 UTCWould that mean that Micheal is the potter heir? Cause if I remember the lore right James dad was the younger brother of the head of the family. Then the head passed without a child meaning james dad was the new head and james the heir. Or I'm miss remembering some fanfic I read as canon
Wanous
2023-01-01 22:03:07 +0000 UTCThis seems very interesting, I wonder what the end goal would be here for Michael, I don't enough about the Godfather - shocking I know - but I feel like with Atticus we already had some sort of defined goal at the beginning of the story. He wanted to create a place for himself and learn of magic perhaps to cope with his past life's happening. Here Michael doesn't seem to have a clear goal but it might just be because this is a snippet and not a real chapter. Anyway I am looking forward to the next chapter of Odyssey but I won't say no to more of that story or the Tartered Dragon, both of whom are excelent.
Zulfy
2023-01-01 21:51:14 +0000 UTCJames' cousin :) though they grew up kinda together
Mosef
2023-01-01 21:50:09 +0000 UTCThose three and this. Thoughhohenheim is on haitus as that is going to be a long one. This story and the tartered dragon are 'easier' stories that wont have a whole universe needing to be fleshed out at the start so I can juggle it all. For now. I have about three more that are I've fleshed out but not written out a plan.
Mosef
2023-01-01 21:49:25 +0000 UTCIt will worked on about the same frequency as the tartered dragon. Odyssey takes precedent (and a lot of time)
Mosef
2023-01-01 21:45:46 +0000 UTCInteresting concept. It has potential and I'm excited to see how this story interacts with the marauders. And whether he will be james older brother or cousin?
Wanous
2023-01-01 21:25:55 +0000 UTCHow many stories are you working on now? (Odyssey, House of the dragon, and HP x Stargate) Do you plan on working them all concurrently or whatever strikes your fancy? Just wondering, I enjoy each of your story's.
No Name
2023-01-01 21:14:57 +0000 UTCGreat start so far, will this become another one of the stories you actively like odyssey?
Basilisk Basilisk
2023-01-01 21:14:22 +0000 UTCNo, this is one is separate. This is set in the canon universe. Ish. :]
Mosef
2023-01-01 20:10:09 +0000 UTCIs this in the same universe as Atticus?
Basilisk Basilisk
2023-01-01 20:07:19 +0000 UTC
