CH68
Added 2022-09-04 14:06:42 +0000 UTCPhew! Well, here it is, enjoy!
Thanks for your patience, I appreciate it! It honestly took a lot to write, strangely enough!
Let me know what you think!
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Mosef
2022-09-17 17:28:10 +0000 UTCHow’s it coming ?
Mike
2022-09-17 14:16:23 +0000 UTCHoping to deliver an even better Arc than 2 and tie everything up with a nice little bow!
Mosef
2022-09-13 19:18:03 +0000 UTCJust an update! Things are looking like I'll be publishing between Thursday - Saturday at the latest. A little later than planned but I'm hoping that I can write at least 1k - 1.5k words between now and then which would see me publish sooner. About 40%-50% is finished (Approx 8k words) with all of the scenes started.
Mosef
2022-09-11 19:42:03 +0000 UTCAnything I could say could diminish what I have planned so I wont say anything on except on re: Magic killed on Earth - no. There are certain beings that can use magic but it doesn't change the fact that even if there are no magical beings there will still be magic on earth given that there is life on earth. There is magic on the moon and in space just lower intensity due to there being no life, no consciousness.
Mosef
2022-09-11 19:32:03 +0000 UTCMOS are quite a mysterious bunch and I wonder how much hand they had in the war with Grindelward? with how they insinuated at how much they were good at divination did they take advantage of Grindelward and used him to get rid of people of interest so that they could grab as much power in the aftermath when they knew that at some point he'll be defeated by either Dumbledore or Atticus?
Master Zen
2022-09-11 14:39:21 +0000 UTCI thought that the divination was weird what with them thinking that Atticus would end magic but this makes the divination make a whole lot more sense as it ain't wrong just interpret differently by MOS
Master Zen
2022-09-11 14:30:19 +0000 UTCI thought I missed something so I've been re reading old chapters trying to find any hints on what they were going to do I'm so excited to see what you've got in store for us
Master Zen
2022-09-11 14:15:59 +0000 UTCYou know, something I thought of, don't remember if it was outright stated in the story, but the MOS are against Atticus because of vague threat of magic disappearing because of him? Isn't that pretty much what's going to happen when they leave Earth and start propagating elsewhere since magic isn't growing but is always at the same intensity in the whole universe but just shifts to where there is the most life linked to it which would mean that Atticus' exodus would kill magic on Earth?
Zulfy
2022-09-11 13:54:42 +0000 UTCI hope that the MOS doesn’t become a true threat to Illos. At this point, he could abscond with the amount of people he has now, plus who he could convince from France, MACUSA, and Japan and do just fine. With the power and foresight he has, I don’t see Atticus taking any serious losses, just setbacks.
thevolunteer
2022-09-11 04:30:51 +0000 UTCA lot of questions! 1) Re angry British magicals serving the royal family - is being addressed. It is an important thread. 2) That will also be addressed though more I think towards the end of the story 3) The centaur's prophesy won't be answered until much later on 4) Also answered later on but what I will say is that often the simplest way is the pragmatic way.
Mosef
2022-09-10 17:10:21 +0000 UTCI wonder though how are they going to get everyone on Illios when there are magicals that are angry with the magical world like the ones serving the British king and what about all the dormant magicals aka squibs that are left in the muggle world like the ones he matched up to get more magical children what's gonna happen to them are they gonna be left behind? Or will everyone be gathered on to Illios like the centaur prophesied? And what about people like MOS and those unsavory lots like the ones that were involved in trafficking magicals I can't imagine that Sayre nor Emily will let them on Illios do they have some kind of device that Moira gave them thats capable of removing the genomes that make magicals capable of magic ensuring that no magical will be born or left in the muggle world when they leave or will they use a blood ritual to do something of the same effect?
Master Zen
2022-09-09 00:17:00 +0000 UTCThe theatre scene was quite the nice touch
Master Zen
2022-09-08 01:27:50 +0000 UTCGlad to hear it! I do have to thank a lot of the earlier reviewers who (some unkindly) pointed things out to me. As time went by, I got the kinks out of my writing, a bit like playing better once you've broken in a new pair of football shoes haha. I did like writing the theatre scene. Personally, I do like that kind of way of progressing the story, through scenes that can progress the story through indirect story telling which I thought the play did very well. Often when it comes to revolutions - when the army allows revolutions to happen - it is typically something that's been simmering under the surface for sometime. Like the Bolshevik revolution, or the French Revolution but the spark could be 'spontaneous' and it can often be 'emotional'. More and more people would talk about that play and with a little bit of help, people will see similarities in their situation and who will they blame? :)
Mosef
2022-09-05 18:30:25 +0000 UTCAbraxas Malfoy isn't yet Head of House Malfoy which is why he wasn't in the Wixen Court. Rockwood don't have a seat in the Wizengamot so that's why
Mosef
2022-09-05 18:20:59 +0000 UTCWhile I did think a bit on Dune, to be honest, I was far more inspired by 'Psychohistory' by Isaac Asimov. I had read years ago and it's a book that just sticks to your mind with how unique and distinctive it is. Combining Seeing with a new mathematical predictive system will probably involve similarities with Dune. To be honest I think it's kind of a natural progression with how magicals can see the future along with the fact that Forerunners (and possibly Ancient humanity too in canon) were connected to 'living time' and saw glimpses of the past, future and present. At present only certain bloodlines can do it because of how 'randomly' such abilities manifest but with the 'de-mystifying' that Atticus and Co are doing about magic, well...I wouldn't surprise if many magicals end up becoming OP. The Blacks and the others will be heavily involved in the Britain thread. Not in the next chapter though. Thanks, appreciate the praise!
Mosef
2022-09-05 18:17:19 +0000 UTCAppreciate the thought! :)
Mosef
2022-09-05 18:09:50 +0000 UTCExtremely interesting and fascinating chapter, I especially enjoyed the theatre scene. Something I have noticed during my re-read of the story is how with time the story has kept on improving both in writing and storylines, I really hope to see where you are going to take us with this!
Zulfy
2022-09-05 15:23:06 +0000 UTCWhat happened to Malfoy, Rockwood etc? Didn’t see them mentioned here
Mike
2022-09-05 14:03:59 +0000 UTCAnother excellent chapter. Thanks
Eric
2022-09-05 04:09:25 +0000 UTCFan. Fucking. Tastic
Rival
2022-09-05 02:30:00 +0000 UTCLove the direction this arc is going. Wondering if Atticus will disseminate the time room and the ROR. Both would be interesting additions to his city. Maybe if Sandra and Derek had more time they and others would be more inclined to start a family? A RoR rec room or a playground for the kids? Also interested to see if Atticus going to popularize rituals. Making a few different sets of rituals for Illosians would have a good multiplicative effect with thousands of citizens. Wondering how Charles and Dorea are doing I have a soft spot for them, also hoping the lovegood clan joined atticus. Pandora needs to meet her husband. The world needs a Luna Lovegood, I know Atticus agrees.
Yeno Memevig
2022-09-05 01:41:08 +0000 UTCthat intense ending!
Nightshadeq8
2022-09-04 18:25:22 +0000 UTCOoohhhhh so this is where fem voldie went to..... though there is stilll very few scenes of M. O. S. only heresay... as the new antagonist, maybe enemy or ?........ love the chapter..... the new branch or direction for sayre and co is in my understanding like dune and its chosen one and bene gessirett powers which is not too op but a hard earned power which when done properly will solidfy the dream.... and the britain situation is also interesting with a turning point in society but I do wonder Emily's opposition, the blacks or others wonder how they are currently doing?..... in all am hype as f*** good job
Monzter E
2022-09-04 14:58:07 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter, don't stress yourself too much.
Randydandy
2022-09-04 14:25:28 +0000 UTC
