Hohenheim's Dream for a Requiem CH1 (amended)
Added 2022-02-19 23:41:23 +0000 UTCHello Everyone! Please see the amended chapter one (final one) that kicks off the next story.
Summary: A man who remembers a past life explores the depths of the magical world, uncovering hidden secrets and traipses through deathly traps. Alchemist, Archeologist, Arcanist. A story with heavy Indiana Jones themes and some elements of FMA (Full Metal Alchemist)
Comments
Also regardless great start so far, will definitely keep reading.
2022-02-20 00:10:32 +0000 UTCI don’t really know if this will screw up future plans so take this with a grain of salt. I would really recommend spending more time In Harry’s present rather then Working chronologically from the past, and Instead writing on the past more a flashbacks or go to them after spending more time farther on the timeline.
2022-02-20 00:09:41 +0000 UTCNice, I'll be reading it, thanks for the chapter.
Gabriel Amador
2022-02-19 23:59:17 +0000 UTC
