Side Story 2 - The Man Who Sought Infinity (Chapter 8)
Added 2023-01-09 05:06:49 +0000 UTCAuthor's Note: In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, this chapter has been removed. The post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.
Comments
Yeah, that's fair. We're considering revising this chapter, although continuing on with the normal schedule is higher up on our priorities. Thanks for the feedback!
KamikazePotato
2023-01-11 04:01:39 +0000 UTCGood job.
CMDR Dantae
2023-01-10 17:57:32 +0000 UTCmmmm, the scene is a bit too jarring. Like, Lucio tells the others there are some blight-implanted people .. queueing up? he can pinpoint more or less how far they are and so give a fairly precise accountment of when they will get first in line... and in all that not one of the others glance at the people in the queue to gauge who they will have to deal with?? it's a bit stretchy on the suspension of disbelief
ciopo
2023-01-09 11:03:29 +0000 UTCMan this is getting better and better :)
M
2023-01-09 09:33:59 +0000 UTCAmazing chapter
Catra
2023-01-09 06:00:45 +0000 UTC
