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Chapter 166 (Book 4 Chapter 43)

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HP-fueled Diplomancy. Incredible

Raphael Mort

Thanks for the kind words! This was a tricky one to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

KamikazePotato

Great chapter. That was a brilliant explanation of manipulation and sociology. You managed to make Diplomacy look every bit as skilled as he is without making it boring to read or hard to understand. I'm impressed.

CMDR Dantae

That's an insidious typo. I had to stare at it for ten seconds before I even realized what the problem was. Thanks for the catch!

KamikazePotato

Hey great chapter. Just want to let you know after Diplomacy's character sheet, where their class is mentioned, shortly afterwards it's mentioned again but as "Aspect of Meditation"

Jannika Nobles

I didn’t see that as implying that they’d react to “Numian” specifically, and more so that they’d react to diplomacy absolutely definitely being a different species than they’re used to

Nick

Why must you torment me with more hints at the world. Diplomacy hiding their class is readily apparent, but why would Elatrans have an instinctual reaction to the name Numian?

Nathan Linder

Yup, thanks for the fix!

KamikazePotato

"While it probably wasn't they'd wanted" missing a word there?

Catra

Amazing chapter

Catra


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