An Outcast In a Familiar World - Side Story Chapter 1
Added 2022-04-18 04:07:52 +0000 UTCAuthor's Note: In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, this chapter has been removed. The post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.
Comments
Noted, I'll probably change that in the final version. He does have a last name which was mentioned in a previous chapter (Miller). Thanks for the feedback!
KamikazePotato
2022-04-28 04:17:51 +0000 UTCThat made me laugh. I would love to see Rob become a therapist. But I think since he chose an advance class, he can't change classes anymore.
Dylan
2022-04-27 05:07:09 +0000 UTCSo, great chapter but before I jump ahead to the next one I wanted to leave this suggestion. We need to tweak the press conference a little. Nobody would say "Mr. Jason" unless his surname was literally Jason (which would be weird AF) and so Mr Jason needs EITHER a real last name or a plausible reason why the press would not already know his name in addition to his entire life story, school transcript, romantic history, et cetera.
NnT042
2022-04-26 02:51:15 +0000 UTCWell he knows why her family died, ironically as revenge for the family of a number of humans all being killed, and they literally committed suicide for it...
CMDR Dantae
2022-04-20 20:07:39 +0000 UTChe'd have no way of knowing just how corrupting it truly is
abowden
2022-04-19 02:43:48 +0000 UTCthis was a great start, can't wait to see what the gods throw at Jason. Also since this is the only place i can really think of writing this, it'd be hilarious if Rob, instead of eventually/potentially killing the Dragon Queen, he beats her, cures her corruption AND then reveals he has taken the Therapist class, and works with Ragnavi through her grief and anger for the loss of her family
thodoris kavouras
2022-04-18 19:21:59 +0000 UTCI'm imagining a "Thor shows up in Wakanda" moment
Julia
2022-04-18 18:28:08 +0000 UTCMan I await the moment Rob steps back to Earth with squad of high level peeps and finally meets Jason again
Mr von Twistern
2022-04-18 16:37:57 +0000 UTCWhat an incredible chapter for this side of the portal! It’s got me theorycrafting a lil bit, and now I can’t help but think of a possible Rob v. Jason clash if Jason gets corrupted by the gods themselves, and gives into Melancholy Resistance if that ever pops up
TheArchivist
2022-04-18 06:11:08 +0000 UTCAmazing chapter, and OHHH shit, jason and the gods
Catra
2022-04-18 05:15:26 +0000 UTC*Player 2 has entered*
Silverwolf
2022-04-18 04:57:48 +0000 UTCLoving it, always wanted more Jason stuff
Papa Pepperoni
2022-04-18 04:41:16 +0000 UTCHold up. Kismet was talking to Jason *before* the abduction? Also interesting that Jason seems to just have what is basically quick thinking as a passive skill.
Nathan Linder
2022-04-18 04:40:26 +0000 UTC
