Chapter 98 (Book 3 Chapter 26)
Added 2021-12-30 05:02:14 +0000 UTCAuthor's Note: In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, this chapter has been removed. The post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.
Comments
Thanks for the kind words :) The last section of this chapter is one of my personal favorite things I've written in the entire story so far.
KamikazePotato
2022-01-03 05:23:38 +0000 UTCI just have to say, this latest writing is absolutely phenomenal. Really glad you took a break because less chapters is worth it if we get chapters of this quality. This kind of reminds me of reading a Stephen King novel, where things just flow, and every part is interesting.
Adam
2022-01-02 16:03:30 +0000 UTCanytime keep up good work and happy new year to come
Madaremius
2021-12-31 18:00:10 +0000 UTCNo, you're right, I misused the word there. Changed it to 'unshaken'.
KamikazePotato
2021-12-31 04:30:24 +0000 UTCI did! Hope you did too!
KamikazePotato
2021-12-31 04:28:00 +0000 UTCI had a great break! Thanks as always for the kind words!
KamikazePotato
2021-12-31 04:27:49 +0000 UTCFixed, thanks!
KamikazePotato
2021-12-31 04:27:09 +0000 UTCI had a great break, thanks :)
KamikazePotato
2021-12-31 04:26:45 +0000 UTCFixed both of these, thanks!
KamikazePotato
2021-12-31 04:26:27 +0000 UTC"Vul'to did his best to portray himself as unnerved, and wasn't entirely successful in that endeavor; the notion that he was trespassing on someone else's property was simply too strong to ignore. In truth, he doubted that anyone in the Deserters was feeling particularly at ease or welcomed right now." This might just be a regional thing(I did some looking and couldn't find it to be the case, but if it is go ahead and ignore me), but you're using unnerved incorrectly here. If someone is unnerved that means they are nervous, or lost their nerve, but you're using it to mean they aren't nervous. I like that Meyneth has upped her game and is just overtly shipping Keira and Rob in front of everyone now.
Nathan Linder
2021-12-31 03:57:25 +0000 UTCThe rips of Keira's ears turned red did you wanted to say "tips" ?
Madaremius
2021-12-30 15:08:09 +0000 UTCThis chapter really hits deep. Now I'm hyped for the attunement coming soon.
CMDR Dantae
2021-12-30 14:13:57 +0000 UTCYou better be well rested, thank you for the magnificent content, but you better be rested.
Austin Boone
2021-12-30 08:14:28 +0000 UTCWhoops, had another one. brace sacrifices of others *brave
Ziggy
2021-12-30 06:25:04 +0000 UTC"You're made much progress *You've
Ziggy
2021-12-30 06:24:13 +0000 UTCHope you had great holidays and rest! Don't get burned out! Amazing chapter
Catra
2021-12-30 05:30:46 +0000 UTCHope you had a great Christmas and Week off, Potato :)
Captain Nuclear
2021-12-30 05:16:28 +0000 UTC
