Chapter 86 (Book 3 Chapter 14)
Added 2021-11-04 04:15:29 +0000 UTCIn accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, this chapter has been removed. The post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.
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Fixed that as well, thanks.
KamikazePotato
2021-11-05 00:59:08 +0000 UTCAlso, when the healer starts speaking to Keira, she refers to them as "him." Then Zamira and Keira both appear to refer to the same healer as "her."
Ziggy
2021-11-04 23:35:43 +0000 UTCYeah, should be 'for a person'. Thanks for pointing it out.
KamikazePotato
2021-11-04 23:32:13 +0000 UTCThanks for the kind words! They're always appreciated.
KamikazePotato
2021-11-04 23:30:57 +0000 UTCThat's weird, as I haven't made any changes to the way I post chapters.
KamikazePotato
2021-11-04 23:28:52 +0000 UTCThanks! Glad you enjoyed it so much :)
KamikazePotato
2021-11-04 23:28:20 +0000 UTCBrilliant ending on this one, genuinely couldn't be better! Personally I think that keiras actions in this case are completely justified, on earth this would be fitting but would make future negotiations very difficult whereas in Eltra (don't think I'm spelling that right) it makes moving forward from their betrayal possible and should actually see the negotiations progress smoother. Thanks for another brilliant installment wordsmith!
Ben Courquin
2021-11-04 22:19:55 +0000 UTCHmm, I’m on iOS. Every other story is fine, it’s just this one that’s doing it and only since that last chapter. Oh well, I’ll just read this story on my browser in the meantime.
Lictor Magnus
2021-11-04 21:35:33 +0000 UTCFine for me, android Patreon app
Catra
2021-11-04 21:30:26 +0000 UTCIs it fine for you in the patreon app or your browser? Browser works just fine for me too.
Lictor Magnus
2021-11-04 21:12:50 +0000 UTCIt's fine for me. Not sure whats causing it for ya. Maybe try a different browser app.
CMDR Dantae
2021-11-04 20:54:25 +0000 UTCWell this was not how I expected this chapter to go, but I'm all for it. Welcome to grey morality Keira, don't forget your justifications and hidden weapons. Damn, that ending though, that was perfect...
CMDR Dantae
2021-11-04 20:39:08 +0000 UTCI’m not sure why but the formatting is was off on this chapter and the last chapter in the patreon app. None of the paragraph spacing is there so it’s just a giant wall of text. It’s totally fine when it look at it using my web browser instead.
Lictor Magnus
2021-11-04 14:39:49 +0000 UTCGodsdamn, you give good story.
Konrahd_Verdammt
2021-11-04 13:26:14 +0000 UTCActually assassins and spies are generally don't get honorable treatment, she was actually more merciful for not just killing them on sight.
NeWorlDark
2021-11-04 13:09:22 +0000 UTCEhh they'll be fineeee, they'll grow back. If they behave
Catra
2021-11-04 11:18:48 +0000 UTCLOL I love how this chapter ends
Glen Shepard
2021-11-04 11:12:24 +0000 UTCSmall edit. "That wasn’t the case when a person with Vitality buffs – specifically, Rob’s Vitality buffs." I think you forgot a part of this sentence or it got away from you. As is, the phrasing of "when a person with vitality buffs" doesn't complete and is left hanging.
Ziggy
2021-11-04 10:39:47 +0000 UTCProbably not a good thing I don't immediately disagree with Keira commiting what are essentially war crimes on recently captured prisoners.
Ziggy
2021-11-04 10:31:17 +0000 UTCGod damn I can only imagine what playing D&D with you would be like. Guess it's back counting down the days until the next chapter...
Austin Boone
2021-11-04 08:38:55 +0000 UTCYeah, that went about as good as I expected.
Craxuan
2021-11-04 04:56:28 +0000 UTCAh, Rob's just got an eldritch horror for a soul. nbd. Also confirmed that Diplomacy has a soul, so that's likely good news on that whole getting a body for them deal.
Nathan Linder
2021-11-04 04:50:20 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed it :)
KamikazePotato
2021-11-04 04:36:08 +0000 UTC'Starting' to?
KamikazePotato
2021-11-04 04:36:00 +0000 UTCokay the system is starting to get downright sassy at this point
Not N. Octopus
2021-11-04 04:29:45 +0000 UTCAmazing chapter! Lmao that ending. Fuck you lothren indeed. Can't wait for the next chapter, linear time sucks
Catra
2021-11-04 04:16:05 +0000 UTC
