Chapter 70 (Part 1)
Added 2021-08-26 04:09:48 +0000 UTCAuthor's Note:
In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, Chapters 1 through 38 have been removed. This post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.
Comments
You have to remember a good portion of the dialogue is with Rob, people’s mannerisms and speech change based on who they are talking to and may reflect more or less of their own personality depending on the others Rob seems quite flippant to anyone who does not share his casual point of view as an example.
Spriggs james
2021-09-01 11:40:20 +0000 UTCI'll do that, good idea.
KamikazePotato
2021-08-27 00:27:08 +0000 UTCMaybe it's the other way around and Rob's speech patterns are just rubbing off on them?
Captaindrake123
2021-08-26 22:16:03 +0000 UTCEveryone has a flair for the dramatic if the moment comes man. And our dear dragon 100% talks like that, and our future berserker fan in the making has talked like that.
DuskDeadman
2021-08-26 15:04:52 +0000 UTCWent back and checked when it got introduced and it needing to be on the leader wasn't mentioned, but don't remember it ever being explicitly stated as being usable with anyone. Chapter 24 if you decide you want to just add that bit in for the official publication.
Nathan Linder
2021-08-26 10:57:06 +0000 UTC“But that would be a lie so blatant that it would burn my lips to speak." "Words are traitorous fiends, and the fewer chances I give them to ruin my good standing, the better.” I think you are over-writing this a bit. These characters do not generally talk like this.
Jason Hornbuckle
2021-08-26 10:47:08 +0000 UTC"...Bunch of flame-touched souls in the Deserters, apparently.” well mostly just the one, really. XD Boy goes through crates of firebombs like they're boxes of cinnamon toast crunch!
Austin Boone
2021-08-26 08:22:55 +0000 UTCHer husband never had a chance.
KamikazePotato
2021-08-26 06:17:45 +0000 UTCZamira's mum is pretty awesome
Amelgar
2021-08-26 06:15:36 +0000 UTCHonestly, in my mind he's always had to be Party 'Leader' for it to work. Which I might never have codified now that I think about it. If there's something in the text that contradicts this, let me know - even the author forgets minor details after 300k words.
KamikazePotato
2021-08-26 06:13:34 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed it!
KamikazePotato
2021-08-26 06:11:36 +0000 UTCOo a two part? Excited
Catra
2021-08-26 06:05:25 +0000 UTCMight be misremebering how the exp share works, but wouldn't Urian just be able to invite Rob into his party and still reap the benefits?
Nathan Linder
2021-08-26 06:03:55 +0000 UTCLooking forward to how the rest of the survivors are caring after the delve. And how all of them are getting flattened by one very VERY pissed off elder :)
Trevor Smith
2021-08-26 05:11:25 +0000 UTCGreat chappie :D
Tor Daniel Nielsen
2021-08-26 05:04:50 +0000 UTC
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