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Chapter 60

Author's Note:

In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, Chapters 1 through 38 have been removed. This post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.

Comments

Maybe it's otherworldly fiction or even horror stories?

Kazerioth

Wait a minute. If exp is granted based on danger wouldn't mean the story several chapters back about a killstealing hero wouldn't work? He shouldn't gain that much extra exp right? Though I guess its just an old story not history.

CMDR Dantae

I agree. I think denial is a much more common reaction to stuff like that than saying "I will be ok after I have time to process these complicated emotions" like some kind of therapy pamphlet.

Jason Hornbuckle

Top 10 on TWF is crazy to me. I have awesome fans! Thanks for your vote, man.

KamikazePotato

Fixed, thanks!

KamikazePotato

A single vote is what separated this fic fromt the top ten in Top Web Fiction. Happy to have been the vote to put you in top ten! Congrats.

Chawki89

This whole, "I'm too emotionally distraught to do anything," feels a little off. Not that it's not plausible, but even on earth we have remains of old civilizations and I think very few people have their motivation quite so crippled by bearing witness to them. It'd be more understandable if he was just tired of his leadership role and was evading responsibility.

Dontspam Meho

"but it's as if not he was treating" should be "but it's not as if he was treating"

So if anyone is looking to level up their seduction skills, Keira is your girl. I half expect Math Dragon to get a very confusing skill acquisition after a few days with our elven barbarian.

Ziggy

In advance. I'm going to throw two cent's, to the tune of "Hey, MB from SB"... First, if it 'were' one way. It'd probably be at best, a Government inspection/inquisition over an 'Alien', Rob going full cover hole. And likely after checks, balances and threat assessment/s; give Keira (or in a case; a "friendly Elf") a Visa, under "can't allow for Stateless people" clause. If we go a bit more derailing 'comedy' of outcasts all following; it'd likely be culture shock to renegade elves; alongside possible Dragonkin, Dwarves, you name it. Fiends or Merfolk included. Two way... I've had daydreams, of 'what could happen'. But joke would be "deconstruct GATE: Thus the JSDF Fought there" premise. Thrown massive speculation on SB already. But at worst; it'd probably be bomb/nuke worthy, a *lot* of civilians killed to the point that the country 'attacked' would be pissed. And want for blood... And then, things would no doubt escalate to a "War is Hell" that is vietnam. But fantasy isekai. And Eltara maaay get nuked harder, or that Blight could definately be spreading and become a problem. Especially if say; "Blight: Now with Machinegun arms." Or shit. And 'side cast' away, that's before Jason get's involved in a drinking reunion/match with Keira, no doubt. And that's before a Dungeon, of "actual levelling montage" happens, that surely hasn't been given foreshadow of also being marked/targeted by parties that are also hunting/want Rob enslaved; if not killed.

Arcane Hermit

Keira: Will make your heart beat very fast or very slow.

KamikazePotato

XD Keira is gonna give someone a heart attack one day and I'm not sure if it'll be from when she's threatening them or making bedroom eyes at them.

Austin Boone

Love it!

Catra


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