Chapter 57
Added 2021-07-12 04:04:55 +0000 UTCAuthor's Note:
In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, Chapters 1 through 38 have been removed. This post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.
Comments
Wooohoo, more to read :D
Fetteworst
2021-08-04 06:11:33 +0000 UTCGlad you enjoyed it! It was one of my favorite chapters to write thus far.
KamikazePotato
2021-07-12 20:55:30 +0000 UTCBleak but good is a specialty of mine!
KamikazePotato
2021-07-12 20:55:11 +0000 UTCAll I'll say is that your comments are thing I've taken into account when writing the plot.
KamikazePotato
2021-07-12 20:54:34 +0000 UTCThough, i have to wonder... How the hell can an Elatran city be so identical to an American city? Even in the same country, cities are often wildly different. Things like architecture and city design are the result of thousands of years of history, culture and practicality. Its flat out weird that a world with an rpg system has such similiar buildings, and kinda implies some things. Perhaps the skills granted by the system are based on skills known by people from Earth? The buildings look like America's because thats where the highest level construction skills come from? Or maybe something else, there is now a Blight invasion of Earth...
CMDR Dantae
2021-07-12 20:30:45 +0000 UTCWell this was inspiring. This chapter really underlined the reality of Rob's situation and how he's dealing with it.
CMDR Dantae
2021-07-12 20:24:45 +0000 UTCGood chapter... Bleak, but good!
Mike G.
2021-07-12 15:27:47 +0000 UTC
