Chapter 52
Added 2021-06-25 04:07:01 +0000 UTCAuthor's Note:
In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, Chapters 1 through 38 have been removed. This post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.
Comments
It's mine, yes. Thanks for looking out for me though!
KamikazePotato
2021-06-25 08:07:20 +0000 UTCHey, so I just found this https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/mv1aiu/an_outcast_in_another_world_subtitle_is_insanity/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share on reddit. Is this you? Because they're claiming OC.
Rain
2021-06-25 07:53:16 +0000 UTCMagical Caffeine is fiiiiiiine. Its the Magical MEGACOKE you gotta watch out for. Those kids get hooked on it faast!
tibbish
2021-06-25 06:28:07 +0000 UTCOoo I like this chapter And I am SOOO looking forward to Dragon Girl meeting the Elves God I can't wait for the next chapter :( 2 or 3 days :( :( :(
Catra
2021-06-25 06:14:13 +0000 UTCNothing like allowing your little sister to have 7 cups of magical caffeine at once, that is bound to end well. Sarcasm.
Copernicus
2021-06-25 05:27:12 +0000 UTCMm that's that good stuff. -- Thanks for writing!
Austin Boone
2021-06-25 04:55:59 +0000 UTCI love his interactions with Diplomacy. Especially when they're both surprised or flustered.
Richard McCain
2021-06-25 04:48:58 +0000 UTCI can't pinpoint exactly why, but I like the interaction this chapter. New perspective and chat with someone not acting totally mercantile, maybe? "a little overly excited to talk with someone who was treating me normal." - I might be wrong and it's a bit pedantic, but I think "normally" is correct. Given I could be wrong and Rob's speech doesn't have to be perfect, just wanted to point it out. The bit with Keira falling to her knees and then lifting Orn'tol up was a tad difficult to visualize, but that could just be me.
Ziggy
2021-06-25 04:44:18 +0000 UTC
