Chapter 44
Added 2021-06-01 07:47:48 +0000 UTCAuthor's Note:
In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, Chapters 1 through 38 have been removed. This post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.
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It was something that was meant to be hinted at in their conversations up until now, with this being an "ooooh" moment. I might go back and make it a bit more obvious on an editing pass. Seduction is similar to Diplomacy, which is also a Passive. It's kind of always on in subtle ways, making you better at that particular social task.
KamikazePotato
2021-06-02 17:08:57 +0000 UTCThis may be just me, but the ending of this wasn't exactly a homerun in terms of investment. Rob and Keira pairing up has been so obvious, telegraphed, expected, and deserved (to the point random people just watching them think they're basically dating already and just haven't realized it) that throwing Zamira into the fray with no real lead-up seems like something added purely for some relationship drama later on. I may just not have been reading deeply into anything previously, but I literally can not think of a single time when Zamira signaled any interest in Keira, and we've been in her head more than once at this point. There was the talk about she admired her for choosing to follow the warrior path and wished she had done the same, and I'm not sure if you meant anything in that conversation Kamikaze, but I didn't pick up anything in there. I'm not saying this was a bad development, just one that momentarily disconnected me from the story with a feeling of "What in the heck? Where is this coming from?" Real talk though, shouldn't Seduction be an Active Skill, not Passive?
Loony123
2021-06-02 11:00:55 +0000 UTChttps://i.stack.imgur.com/nGMrD.gif
KamikazePotato
2021-06-02 02:06:29 +0000 UTCPANCAKES PANCAKES PANCAKES
Catra
2021-06-02 01:55:41 +0000 UTCGuess Rob has some competition now
Javier Runco
2021-06-01 18:45:18 +0000 UTCnow , i'm crossing finger for it to happen lol. i love strange fuck fest/harem thing.
Scesce Scesce
2021-06-01 14:07:14 +0000 UTCbtw kudos to zamira, she can literally seduce people without actually wanting to seduce them.
Scesce Scesce
2021-06-01 14:06:36 +0000 UTCI mean it's also just as likely this is the system fucking with her.
unsaintlyangel
2021-06-01 13:13:23 +0000 UTCI don't think it'll go harem anime on us. I think poor Rob is about to get left high and dry though. RIP.
DuskDeadman
2021-06-01 11:39:58 +0000 UTCI'm out the second this turns to a harem/fuck fest drama. Way too many good stories completely fucked with that stuff to bother putting more time and interest into a ticking time bomb. The story's great so far so it'd be a shame, but way too many authors seem to think that, "it'll be different this time. I can do it better."
ZaA
2021-06-01 10:34:28 +0000 UTCOh, I like where this is going.
Saltymen
2021-06-01 10:26:18 +0000 UTCTotally forgot that! They should be safe since they are so close to Reviton, right?
Paul Jaeger
2021-06-01 09:46:56 +0000 UTCDoubt fast learner has any impact on earning skills...but leveling them
Silver Beard
2021-06-01 09:40:38 +0000 UTCThe real elephant in the room is the group heading to Reviton just lost their crystal storage...doubt they have a backup plan.
Silver Beard
2021-06-01 09:38:38 +0000 UTCVul'to has been refusing to join Rob's party in spite of the benefits for "some reason." I'm assuming it's going to come up in the conversation as a means to empathize that he has some sort of status effect telegraphing a really bad mental state or something.
Ziggy
2021-06-01 09:36:53 +0000 UTClol, not a big surprise. was certainly getting those vibes for awhile now. now the important question... did she do that without Fast Learner?
Amelgar
2021-06-01 08:55:25 +0000 UTCVul'to and Rob are up next. I gotta get my popcorn ready
Amelgar
2021-06-01 08:51:26 +0000 UTCAt least it got Keira's mind off things. Now I want to see how Vul’to can top that
Paul Jaeger
2021-06-01 08:48:25 +0000 UTCHmm… interesting…
Jordan Burnett
2021-06-01 08:36:07 +0000 UTCDamn, that's the 2nd ship that has left port now. How long before the polyamouras triad is confirmed?
Nathan Linder
2021-06-01 08:31:31 +0000 UTC
