Chapter 35
Added 2021-05-12 05:01:33 +0000 UTCAuthor's Note:
In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, Chapters 1 through 38 have been removed. This post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.
Comments
deadpool is cringe. please don't equate our MC to that clown.
bob barker
2021-05-17 11:56:42 +0000 UTCKerrus Magrus - So do you think it is like a cell phone tower or gas station ? The former will cut off instantly, while the latter wouldn't but it will no longer be useable.
Copernicus
2021-05-12 11:04:01 +0000 UTCSo unless the entire class system is breaking, my guess is that each class crystal is a separate entity working or administering the system cooperatively. Presumably in charge of a certain radius, and the rest of the system has to accept whatever has been given to those administered by the system, even if a given class crystal/entity might have different biases, etc. This could actually explain a lot about the history of the world, especially if system administration doesn't have system-wide fast contact (ie: class crystals don't have their own internal intranet so one instantly knows everything every other crystal knows). Alternatively, it could just be a message from the entity that brought Rob to this world and this is the last time it's gonna talk to him. I don't expect the system itself is gonna break, because giving Rob all those stat points would be pretty meaningless if they immediately ceased to have value. But who knows.
Kerrus Magrus
2021-05-12 10:48:55 +0000 UTCStory twist, with all the Vitality points, Rob had become Deadpool. (the funny one, not the imposter from wolverine)
Copernicus
2021-05-12 09:51:55 +0000 UTCThanks for the kind words! This scene has been in the planning stages since way back in Chapter 5, so I'm glad it went over well.
KamikazePotato
2021-05-12 08:04:46 +0000 UTCNice job author, much better than I expected and better than most other authors accomplish too
tibbish
2021-05-12 07:33:06 +0000 UTCAnd now we wait
SquiddlyWinks
2021-05-12 06:50:45 +0000 UTCI was about to comment and say thanks for the story it’s been a fun ride lol. There’s so many options. A god could step in and revive him, it’s secretly been a loop story and we just didn’t know it yet, or maybe humans end up somewhere else when they die post cataclysm.
Lictor Magnus
2021-05-12 05:49:13 +0000 UTCDevious, author-dude! Absolutely devious!
BubblyGhost
2021-05-12 05:28:15 +0000 UTCSide note: I was extremely tempted to act like the story was ending here and to tell everyone to pack it in, Rob had a good run. This was a terrible idea so I didn't do it, but man, it was tempting. Short follow-up chapter will be posted tomorrow.
KamikazePotato
2021-05-12 05:25:09 +0000 UTCI'm sorry but, Nani the fuck?
Laddimor
2021-05-12 05:16:04 +0000 UTC