Chapter 33
Added 2021-05-07 06:29:50 +0000 UTCAuthor's Note:
In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, Chapters 1 through 38 have been removed. This post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.
Comments
i wanted keira to die, but unfortunately it wasn't to be, atleast yet...
Scesce Scesce
2021-05-15 20:26:55 +0000 UTCMan, I am upset. Alia fucking died offscreen to the god damn rat, and she was building up to be such a good character too. I know someone from the current main cast had to die, but I was honestly expecting it to be Orn'tol. He had more attention given to him than Alia, and closer bonds with Rob, so that would effect him the most. Not to mention that Alia was shaping up to be someone you'd warm up to in the long run. I guess Orn'tol has similarly high potential as a whimpy underdog that became better later on, though.
Bodoroo
2021-05-13 21:59:32 +0000 UTCForgot to add it, honestly.
KamikazePotato
2021-05-12 05:25:41 +0000 UTCGood stuff. Where is robs leveling high?
Ryan Silveira
2021-05-12 05:12:06 +0000 UTCDamn, i really wanted Alia to live, maybe even visit Earth, should a way back be found.
Copernicus
2021-05-07 19:35:05 +0000 UTCDang. I thought Alia and Rob would have a chance to be friends eventually. I appreciate what you're doing though. We now know that anyone can die whenever.
Lictor Magnus
2021-05-07 15:27:23 +0000 UTCGlad you're enjoying the story, and trust me, I'm very cross with myself too. How dare I do this. But the story demanded it, and sometimes to make the best possible narrative you have to break a few omelets. Or cast members.
KamikazePotato
2021-05-07 15:26:35 +0000 UTCYou're welcome!
KamikazePotato
2021-05-07 15:25:04 +0000 UTCYou suck dude, I had a grin as I read how everyone was fucking shit up, and then Riardin and the part screen went and punched me in the kidney. All and all loving it so far but damn man
SYCOTIC
2021-05-07 13:06:51 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! Didn't see it coming even though it should have been expected to happen.
Paul Jaeger
2021-05-07 09:01:51 +0000 UTCAww
BubblyGhost
2021-05-07 08:26:58 +0000 UTC
