Chapter 29
Added 2021-05-07 06:20:23 +0000 UTCAuthor's Note:
In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, Chapters 1 through 38 have been removed. This post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.
Comments
Thank you for sharing. This is the kind of impression I was trying to give when making this chapter, so I'm glad it resonated with you.
KamikazePotato
2021-05-13 20:54:21 +0000 UTCThis chapter has been excellent. You see that in most isekais, the mc will feel a bit homesick, even sometimes in the case of it being a dream come true for a nerdy mc, it's kind of a trope on its. As they grew in power and be accustomed to the place though, they seem to forget about the world they left behind. Rob hasn't been here for a long time, but he became involved in it for long enough that he is begining to adapt. Not every waking moment of his is a constant struggle for living ever since he came to this village, and we see that from him reading a book. Although it's just a tool for authors to tell more lore of the world, and sometimes people consider these moments or chapters dedicated to these to be fillers, I think it confirms that there are mundane things happening in the background. Not as intresting as the juicy main parts of the story, but also a part that makes characters resamble a real person. And that breakdown Rob had, just as he was adapting to this world and having something resambling a daily life had an amazing timing. Maybe I am reading too much into it. Maybe we will never have Rob breaking down for these reasons again, and the story will simply be a mundane isekai. But I just really, really liked how this chapter played out, and wanted to share the reason why I liked it so much.
Bodoroo
2021-05-13 20:17:43 +0000 UTCThe relationship pacing has been excellent. I do wonder if Zamira or Alia will ever come into play. Love triangle?
Charlie
2021-05-12 18:15:09 +0000 UTC+1 vote (not that it's a voting kinda thing, you write your story, not mine) for plan roadtrip! This world is fulla dicks. Maybe they can emigrate to Elos... ;) There's a gal there who's getting good at traveling btwn worlds, and has a limited tolerance for dickish leaders. The ending was sweet, tho, and the pacing/development of it seemed just right.
fbt
2021-05-11 06:31:22 +0000 UTCHe wasn't close to death - had 2/3 of his HP and didn't even need to pop a Lifesurge. This level of immobilization due to trauma isn't a recurring thing though.
KamikazePotato
2021-05-07 17:26:00 +0000 UTCEehhh having him just stand there suddenly and let himself get near killed out of nowhere because of depression is more than a bit much there author. Please don't do that sort of thing again!
tibbish
2021-05-07 17:07:49 +0000 UTC
