[Hereafter] Chapter CXXI: No Worse for Wear
Added 2023-10-01 17:27:05 +0000 UTCThis one wound up being...a lot of summary of what Ritsuka went through inside of Chateau d'If. I was surprised and a little frustrated that so much time was spent on that, but I tried to make it more engaging, and I think that was what made it balloon a little bit past my expectations.
Well, the big event is passed, so maybe now that things aren't falling apart, the team can finally get a chance to relax before London. They should be so lucky, right?
I do have a few things I want to get through before we hit the next big main plot section, so there're still a few chapters left before we get to preparing and deploying into the next Singularity.
EDIT: Moving down all the way. 11/12/2023
Comments
It'll be interesting to see the dynamic changes in the twins. Rika has had a taste of the fear and powerlessness that losing Ritsuka brings, so will she cling even tighter or seek out Taylor for advice?
Gifted-Monster
2023-10-02 07:52:31 +0000 UTCI wonder where our protagonists will go from here, especially as far as personal relationships and secrets go.
s22132
2023-10-02 06:32:42 +0000 UTCThere. That *should* have fixed it.
Caractacus
2023-10-02 00:33:12 +0000 UTCIt seems they did. This never happened until I upgraded to Word 2021.
Caractacus
2023-10-02 00:28:50 +0000 UTCThe pages are split really strangely resulting in multiple pages that are half blank. Did something get borked in the formatting?
SilverShadows
2023-10-01 23:42:51 +0000 UTCI swear to god I read “it can’t actually be me.” Then I reread it and I was not that
Masofuts
2023-10-01 18:55:29 +0000 UTC
