[Hereafter] Chapter CXX: Perils of Uncertainty
Added 2023-09-24 12:16:00 +0000 UTCI got so caught up in Da Vinci's theory that I actually forgot what the original structure was supposed to be for a minute.
It feels a lot like the last few chapters didn't do too much of anything — but then, the whole point was how this thing stretched on for Taylor because she felt helpless and useless, like she was just sitting around and waiting for Ritsuka to die in his sleep. If that's something the readers feel, too, then hey, it got conveyed properly, although it might be a bit of a difficult read when it's spread across weeks like this, huh?
The editor smiled at that one joke and laughed at the end, so everything came out the way I wanted it to.
EDIT: Moving down all the way. 11/05/2023
Comments
Ultimate cockblock by Ritsuka there. Taylor's all ready to go in and then..."Hi guys, I'm back!"
Gifted-Monster
2023-09-29 00:09:16 +0000 UTCEvery time EMIYA does something silly, all I can think is "thank god he was summoned by Rika and not Taylor, because the synchronization there would be entirely different the other way"
Raphael Mort
2023-09-25 18:02:27 +0000 UTCLmao, the anticlimax and the emiya joke were hilarious.
Vega
2023-09-24 17:57:25 +0000 UTCNo trouble. I do stuff like that sometimes, too.
Caractacus
2023-09-24 14:22:28 +0000 UTCAh, I decided to take a more careful review to find it exactly, and I seem to of tripped on a statement that could of been referring to one of two people, one of whom is Da Vinci and the other the likely refered to person, and somehow read half the male pronouns in the rest of the document as refering to Da Vinci. Sorry 'bout that.
Abbi
2023-09-24 14:04:18 +0000 UTCNo. And they shouldn't be. If they seem to be, then either it's a typo or someone else (like Waver, Romani, or Emiya) is the one actually talking.
Caractacus
2023-09-24 13:54:47 +0000 UTC(Also, thank goodness she wakes up now. Yay!)
Abbi
2023-09-24 13:51:34 +0000 UTCI haven't noticed such in any previous chapters, though I could of just missed it, so - are Da Vinci's pronouns meant to be changing all the time?
Abbi
2023-09-24 13:50:50 +0000 UTC
