[Hereafter] Chapter CXVIII: Château d'If
Added 2023-09-11 04:00:45 +0000 UTCTaylor: coming up with the right answers...to the wrong questions.
A large part of this chapter wound up being that dream sequence at the beginning. But it was too good a scene to excise, and it worked well for what I needed to do. I wanted to address it more in this chapter, but the ending as it is now was just way too good to push out and tack on the next scene.
I hope that dream sequence hit home. It certainly did for Taylor.
EDIT: Moving down all the way. 10/22/2023
Comments
I really love that first scene, great job!
Seno
2023-09-11 20:11:42 +0000 UTCThat was a hell of a dream Taylor had. Yikes... I wonder how this experience will change both Ritsuka and Rika... Well, Taylor came up with the correct answer; now, how does that help them? Thanks for the update.
s22132
2023-09-11 12:00:45 +0000 UTCFive bucks says Rika thinks it's named after the sandwich. Any takers?
Gifted-Monster
2023-09-11 07:30:22 +0000 UTCWouldn’t be interesting if he gets out of the curse and is just absolutely terrified of Taylor? Because every night he is there he has to watch her kill her way in looking for him, before losing focus and killing he way back out?
Vega
2023-09-11 06:15:05 +0000 UTC
