[Hereafter] Chapter XCI: Euryale's Woe
Added 2023-02-25 11:24:46 +0000 UTCThis is where I start to throw some more wrenches into things. Even if the stupidly convoluted plot makes it hard to do much with Okeanos without revamping the whole thing, there's still a few things I want to do to spice up the subplots.
There were also a lot of places where Taylor felt like she got to strut her social fu. I don't know if you can call it charisma, but it definitely did what she wanted it to do, and I really liked how those sections turned out.
EDIT: Moving down.
Comments
“It’s all the more I have”? I’d say ‘it’s all I have’ or ‘I don’t have any more’, not an amalgamation of both…
V01D
2023-03-26 15:58:57 +0000 UTCGiven the mentioning of the curse, my money is on Medea given she was cursed to aid...Jason iirc?
Gifted-Monster
2023-02-26 09:58:06 +0000 UTC😡
Green0Photon
2023-02-25 19:08:22 +0000 UTCI wonder...
Caractacus
2023-02-25 19:07:10 +0000 UTCAh, sorry, I wasn't specific enough. I know who Calliope the Muse is, but I don't think this is that person. Parts of the text make it seem like you don't plan for this person to be her either, and just is a disguise.
Green0Photon
2023-02-25 19:02:44 +0000 UTCA Muse from Greek mythology. Her domain is eloquence and epic poetry. She's also Orpheus' mom — the guy who tried to rescue his lover from the underworld, and failed because he didn't follow instructions not to look at her until after they'd escaped.
Caractacus
2023-02-25 18:48:26 +0000 UTCWho the heck is Calliope?
Green0Photon
2023-02-25 17:50:14 +0000 UTCAs I said. Euryale, my ale, everybody's ale!
Gifted-Monster
2023-02-25 11:26:00 +0000 UTC
