[Hereafter] Chapter LXX: After Action Reflection
Added 2022-09-25 13:14:10 +0000 UTCHere we go. Some Romani being Romani, some Taylor being Taylor, and the twins being the twins, and also Arash being a total bro. The twins go, "We're shounen heroes! We don't accept ultimatums!" And Taylor's response is basically, "That's nice, but this is a seinen, so those rules don't apply."
The conversation turned a bit heavy for a while there, but these are some of the lessons the twins still need to learn. I feel like Emiya must have had some very complicated feelings watching this from the sidelines. "Just because you're correct doesn't mean you're right!"
This was actually... I wasn't quite sure what to do with this when I first started it, but I don't think the direction it wound up going was necessarily bad. It might feel a little abrupt, though.
EDIT: Moving down.
Comments
Makes me think of all the times when I'm in the shower thinking up the perfect responses when someone says something. But in the moment...blegh.
Gifted-Monster
2022-09-26 09:22:19 +0000 UTCThis does make me wonder what events you have planned. I could see the Prisma Collab as Chloe/ Kuro could be a dead ringer for Aisha and Illya for a pre-Emma Taylor. Plus seeing Taylor in that sugary wonderland would be like seeing a serial killer in an orphanage
Gifted-Monster
2022-09-26 09:13:31 +0000 UTCYeah. The editing team wasn't quite sure what to make of that line of dialogue until I had Taylor come down on it like that, and then it was much better received.
Caractacus
2022-09-25 23:55:06 +0000 UTCPoor Roman. I'm not sure if it's better or worse, knowing who he truly is. That was a tough conversation with the twins, but I think it was needed. Overconfidence can kill just as fast as lack of faith in yourself, and sooner or later, they're going to have to make some very tough choices.
s22132
2022-09-25 13:48:24 +0000 UTCThe “then why didn’t you” line killed it wow
Vega
2022-09-25 13:47:08 +0000 UTCThank for the chapter! Definitely some interesting conversation.
cystrom
2022-09-25 13:30:52 +0000 UTC
