Pendulum 0.3
Added 2018-01-27 15:54:42 +0000 UTCIt feels a little...unfinished, in some ways. Like there was more I could have added or expanded. But if I'd expanded every bit that even resembled summarization into full, descriptive text, this chapter would have ballooned to an unreasonable size.
That, and the parts that are summarized probably wouldn't have been all that interesting to read in full, anyway.
Next up, arc 5: Sunder. There's a reason it's called that, folks. A very good reason.
Comments
Nice interlude. It was refreshing to get away from something unfortunately tainted by all the drama - to something that reminded me of exactly why I started reading and loving this story. I think Worm stories have to ration out the (in story) drama; otherwise readers just sort of burn out. It becomes less 'what will happen next' and more 'what will go horribly wrong next'. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter/arc, without any expectations. Sundering could refer to so, so many things: people, relationships, status quos, etc etc.
Peter Christensen-Calvin
2018-01-28 21:51:35 +0000 UTCOkay, I laughed at that one.
Caractacus
2018-01-27 19:34:27 +0000 UTCPeople get cut in half? Lengthways?
Paul Rendell
2018-01-27 17:04:37 +0000 UTC
