Collateral 4.b: Amicus Curiae
Added 2018-01-26 03:38:27 +0000 UTCWell, I did say, "As soon as I finish," so it's finished and you're getting it now.
On the other hand, since this is coming out on Saturday, you guys only get exclusivity for a few days. I really need to get back on this damn horse, but I'm much closer than I was a week ago.
Anyway, here's 4.b: Amicus Curiae. Remember that hanging plot strand introduced in 1.b way back when? Yeah. That's involved, here.
Comments
Nice job playing up how socially isolated Emma really was. Taylor thinks Emma runs the school and is friends with everyone, but Taylor's incredibly unreliable as a narrator. This is a great chapter.
Gerand Rague
2018-01-26 04:43:15 +0000 UTCIt's not sympathy I'm feeling for her.
Benjamin Lawton
2018-01-26 04:32:44 +0000 UTCSucks man...
Erick reyes
2018-01-26 04:30:53 +0000 UTC...and the only friend who would have helped Emma wouldn't piss on her if she was on fire. Yes Emma's not in a great place and hasn't been for a while, but that's the thing about Karma; it doesn't fucking care.
Dr. Mercurious
2018-01-26 04:28:35 +0000 UTC... Very few stories make me feel sympathy for Emma. As a character, she's often unutilized or utilized badly. But here you have done an excellent job here.
Omnissah
2018-01-26 04:18:35 +0000 UTCI... have no words.
Benjamin Lawton
2018-01-26 04:05:56 +0000 UTC
