An Essence of Silver and Steel: Disillusion Interlude 2.a: Fractured Paragon Parallel
Added 2017-08-12 12:49:16 +0000 UTCI'm not totally happy with this one, but there comes a point where you have to look at a chapter and say, "Yeah, this is as good as I'm gonna get it."
But don't ever ask me to write a procedural crime drama. Apparently, I'm not very good at it.
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I think the plan is to just apologize and leave her alone. Maybe help fast track her application to Arcadia. Unfortunately, the Wards ship has sailed no matter what they do.
Caractacus
2017-08-14 00:17:19 +0000 UTCOne option for the PRT to mend this horribly burned bridge would be to simply ask if Taylor has any hero form that can sense lies/motivations. It would be at least an option to convince her that they are remorseful, didn't know about it and don't plan to railroad her. Not sure which hero would be the best for that, Karna and Holmes would work certainly but not sure Taylor knows about/would think about summoning either of them.
2017-08-13 21:55:01 +0000 UTCYou're a $13+ pledge, so you'll soon be getting up to 3.5 (through happy coincidence) via Google Docs. Look out for the emails inviting you to comment on them.
Caractacus
2017-08-13 06:45:10 +0000 UTCI finally caved and signed up here just to get as far as I can in this story. Totally worth it.
StormyAngel
2017-08-13 05:47:25 +0000 UTC
