SUCCUBUS IS NOW AN ICE QUEEN (a writing prompt)

Hi guys in my upper tiers ($10 and up). I have the rough draft written for the script that I mentioned earlier about the Succubus. I turned her into an Ice Queen. So after reading this, if you have any ideas and can add anything to this, private message me. It doesn't have to be a lot or written well, just an idea or a couple of sentences or more. Anything at all.  I will include at least something from each one of you into the final copy. Lets put a deadline on this of Nov 15th. On that day, I will begin piecing the final copy together and recording the script. 

I've never done this before and I think it will be fun.

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ICE QUEEN IN THE MOUNTAINS

In snowy mountains near a village lived a beautiful Ice Queen (or what is she called? Not sure I like the name “Queen” for this ).  Her skin is flawless and pale white. Her eyes are the most beautiful violet (or ice blue). Her hair is…… She would come out at night to hunt, making her way into the village to look for men as they slept. She would then hypnotize them and drain them of their semen (in some sexy way, to be determined. BJ? Titty fuck and then BJ?  hmmm…)  as she needed this for her diet. A diet she needed for survival. And in doing so, takes their life energy, where the man  slowly turns to ice or freezes and dies.

The village folks, discovering many men frozen in their beds (or does she lure them to the mountains and they come up missing?) ??? The King can’t have so many men in the village dying, he needed them to help protect the village. So he finds the strongest, most powerful knight in all the land (the listener) and hires him to find the Ice Queen and kill her.

One evening the knight climbs the mountain, finds and meets the Ice “Queen”  and of course falls under her hypnotic power, her spell and loses all of his power.  A strong knight, now helpless and weak and under the spell of the intoxicating Ice “Queen”

The Ice Queen  is so hungry and so eager to taste the semen of this powerful night, for she knows it will be better than that of the common men she has taken in the village. (????)

She begins taking the knight’s semen (by bj??? Or a titty fuck and then bj????)

The knight cums, but his penis doesn’t go soft which is very unusual considering the intensity of the queen’s actions, it is still rock hard. And he didn't die, they always die, which surprised and shocked the Queen. But it also arouses her. This was a challenge. The orgasms she gave men were sooo intense that their cocks always fell deflated. But not this time. She had never seen this happen before. So she gives him a second orgasm (by bj or titty fuck and then right before he cums, stopping to give him a Bj to drink every drop of his cum?????).  Again the Knight’s cock doesn’t go soft.

The Ice Queen is again shocked from the knight’s sexuality so as a reward she decides to fuck him with her pussy and give him a third orgasm. This had never happened before. The Ice Queen was a virgin until now.

The Ice “Queen” is so impressed, she makes the knight a slave for her and promises she will not kill any more men in the village for their semen  because she found an unlimited source of semen from her slave any time she needs it.