Revenge Page148
Added 2022-11-14 23:12:47 +0000 UTC
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I am also not against creators who write/draw porn. I just ask that there's honesty about what's being made and to be honest about one's kinks. That they don't go on a long defense about what it supposedly represents. As long as it's not messed up.
Leroy Preston
2022-11-16 16:51:02 +0000 UTCI thought about one more thing you would add if you just wanted Revenge to be pure porn. That you would constantly add in new BBW characters for Cass/Lexi to make out with. Or to have these characters make out with Cindy and/or her sisters. Or have them in sexy scenarios with no build up.
Leroy Preston
2022-11-16 02:39:17 +0000 UTCI'm praising you for how you approach the plot seriously and tell a story more than just a girl who gains weight and embraces her curves.
Leroy Preston
2022-11-16 01:43:11 +0000 UTCI wonder if I would call revenge a porn with plot comic. I know there's a loooooong debate about what exactly is porn. For simplicity's sake, let's call porn material intentionally meant to be sexually enticing and it can range from cheesecakey sexually enticing art (like bikini/lingerie pics) where at most we see nudity to hardcore explicit stuff that is very NSFW. I wonder if you would call Revenge porn under this definition. If so, I wonder if you would call revenge porn with plot. If you didn't have a plot, then you wouldn't build up lexi and cass's relationship, you wouldn't have lexi go through character development, you wouldn't have cass's feelings towards Lexi change, and you wouldn't give a backstory for Cindy. I feel if you wanted to just make porn, you would've had Cass and lexi make out several times, have multiple bikini beach scenes and lingerie pillow fights, throw them into sexy scenarios with no build up, and possibly have Lexi make out with cindy and/or her sisters if you didn't take the plot seriously. While you are making sexually enticing material, you're at least competent with your plot and characters and try to work in sexy moments when the plot calls for it .
Leroy Preston
2022-11-16 00:54:50 +0000 UTCDelightful backstory! I like Cindy evermore with every little thing we learn, and the pregnancy cravings was a great touch :D Excited to see the siblings someday too, Thanksgiving is gonna be one full table!
Skellie
2022-11-15 00:29:00 +0000 UTCI absolutely love how your story has a sense of realism to it! It makes it a lot more interesting! Great job!
SpaceExtra
2022-11-15 00:10:11 +0000 UTCWill they be named?
Leroy Preston
2022-11-14 23:57:24 +0000 UTCThanks!
Leroy Preston
2022-11-14 23:57:07 +0000 UTCThey may be appearing in some thanksgiving sketches
Annonnxyz
2022-11-14 23:56:53 +0000 UTCLike if he threw a fit over his wife becoming fat or if he just remained passive over it and eventually left her.
Leroy Preston
2022-11-14 23:44:40 +0000 UTCPerhaps someone can make suggestions for them to appear in some material? 😁
Leroy Preston
2022-11-14 23:39:05 +0000 UTCI now hope to see the rest of Cindy's sisters and know their names and personalities
Leroy Preston
2022-11-14 23:28:38 +0000 UTCThanks for posting this! I am curious to see what Simon did next and how similar he is to John (Lexi's dad).
Leroy Preston
2022-11-14 23:27:05 +0000 UTC
