Thank you,
I had versions where the cum would splash more, but then some particles would explode/glitch. I didn't find any solution to that, so I had to make a choice.
Tiaz-3dx
2018-09-14 19:48:48 +0000 UTC
Hey thanks for the feedback, yes it was mostly a time issue. It was taking way too long imo. And particles are a nightmare to work with tbh. Next time will def be better
Tiaz-3dx
2018-09-14 19:47:39 +0000 UTC
The movements are nice, the initial jerk from her head looks like a very realistic response. A little bit of personal criticism. The cum burst into the mouth looks a little, not sure how to say it, too perfect/precise? Like it hit it's mark perfectly, when you'd expect it to be messier or have her mouth open more so it doesn't look so precise.
The other thing being the cum a solid white color, looks like he pushing out Elmer's glue.
Overall I love the animation, just hoping this feedback will help in some way. If this was a time restraint issue/ this was intended as a bonus quickie and you're aware of the above observations, just didn't have the time to make everything perfect or more detailed, then you can disregard this. Either way, well done!
2018-09-14 19:09:46 +0000 UTC
just some feedback, dk if you appreciate that or not but, lemme preface this by saying that compared to EVERYONE else's cum animations this is god-like, it actually looks like it sits on her face and runs a little bit as opposed to flying through her, but it'd be cool if the jizz it self spurt out a little more and more quickly and sort of speckled her face lol maybe like a strand covering one eyes or from the tip of her nose to her lips, look up Alex Legend cumshots for inspiration, especially some of his work with Penny Pax ;) but again, this shit is amazing!