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(F4M) (NSFW) ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿคซ Teasing your Partner in the Public Library~...


๐Ÿ“š You're more of a Hands On Learner aren't you?... ๐Ÿ“š

Artist: Densha Tsuugaku-chuu Kossori Nakadashi Sasetekureru Classmate no Kuroi-san

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This was absolutely phenomenal in every regard, I really loved it! ๐Ÿซ  The writing and acting were amazing as usual, and same goes for the editing. I enjoyed the intro talk at the beginning to set the scene, you really were incredibly cute โ˜บ๏ธ And I also liked how that cuteness shifted to a more sussy vibe throughout the scene, the teasing by making the girlfriend describe what they get up to at night was a nice touch. Choosing a library for the setting was a neat idea in general, too. The sound effects were also great to really paint the picture and create a sense of immersion, like the page turning from the manga as well as the โ€œspaghetti stirringโ€ noises ๐Ÿ‘€ The muffled moans were really hot, and I loved how you ended up getting more into it yourself throughout the audio, to the point of really craving it as well and wanting to continue in the public bathroom after admitting that you enjoyed it, too. The reverb sound effect to indicate that they are in the bathroom was nice and worked well, and the moans and overall acting as well as the talk were incredibly hot, too. The close up breathing and the kisses at the very end were just the perfect icing on the cake. So, yeah. Thatโ€™s just my two cents on this audio, I really enjoyed this one, you did a fantastic job at bringing this to life ๐Ÿ˜„ Love you, Raya ๐Ÿ’œ

Saftkeks

Whew I escaped the angle this is at least better ๐Ÿ™ƒ

Goo

Audio should be up now! For some reason it didnt upload with the post...

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