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A Storm's Lullaby Page 190

Page 190!

Slow down, Lulu ^^'


The last question is a throwback to Page...4. Posted December 2019! 


A Storm's Lullaby Page 190

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For comedic effect, Lulu could take a deeeep inhale between cells 2&3!

Rocky Blues (AKA LegionOfBlues)

Fixing "the", thanks! Shouldn't "u" as a vowel be proceeded by "an" and not "a"?

In the middle "And I was flying and a scary pegasus" , she already stated a scary pegasus, might be 'the' scary like later. Was "an unicorn" on pg4 just her speech or should it have been 'a unicorn'?

Steve Lynx (Boulder)

I do hope some of the development sticks with her. Like Tempest will ask if she needs a break and she will be like "N-no, I can take it"

Someone cast slow on Lulu!

Rocky Blues (AKA LegionOfBlues)

Today on A Storm's Lullaby: Lulu summing up the last fifty pages in a few sentences. She’s super adorable in this page.

NTG

^^

indeed ^_^

Yep :D

Nah, kids her age tend to take things literally.

I am wondering if Lullaby is autistic with her taking things so literally.

naaaaaaw Lulu remebers the one with the questions. so sweet and adorable! i want to hug her ^^

Ironbuster

what an adventure.

Lux The Pegasus

She still remembers that one. :D

Myrkin


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