Maybe one thing you could do is have the patreons be one full page ahead of the deviantart ones.
2020-10-18 08:00:05 +0000 UTC
Oh, the sad part is only just beggining.
2020-10-15 11:47:57 +0000 UTC
I wonder... :0
2020-10-15 11:46:10 +0000 UTC
Hmm, I know what you mean. I was wondering about it. A page like this would be good for the flow of the story but I think not very interesting altogether tbh. So I hope the dialogue - and the colour, too - will smooth out this transation a bit a bit. (This may be a bonus page in Book 4 though).
2020-10-15 11:45:36 +0000 UTC
Oh wow, that was quick. I mean, I’m glad we didn’t leave Lulu to be sad for a long time, but that was quick.
Double R Forrest
2020-10-15 11:44:44 +0000 UTC
I've fixed the neck.
2020-10-15 11:42:12 +0000 UTC
it's a bit sudden the events between the previous page and this one, I would have devoted a page or two more to the reaction and the investigation of Tempest and Thistle when they realized that she was gone
Lux The Pegasus
2020-10-15 11:32:45 +0000 UTC
Oh, look! It's Fireweed! I'm sure he will be happy to learn he has become an uncle. :D
Myrkin
2020-10-15 11:18:22 +0000 UTC
Thistle's neck does seem kind of long in the second panel.
But I'm glad she is not afraid to get mad and yell at Lullaby when it's appropriate. I do hope that you won't add a "Don't feel bad" to this. Lullaby should feel bad about what happened. I always hated that when adults did that. That I wasn't allowed to feel bad when I did something wrong.