HammerTime 23
Added 2024-06-12 07:47:09 +0000 UTCComments
When Natasha finds out literally all the Widows are working for him she's going to have a heart attack.
JollyHippopotamus
2024-06-13 13:40:14 +0000 UTCIt is completely her teasing Justin, and her widow sisters getting in on the gag, it will become clear soon enough, but perhaps I'll add it into the chapter that Domino or someone realizes exactly what she is doing to clarify it.
JollyHippopotamus
2024-06-13 02:48:48 +0000 UTCI feel that toward the end, Yelena's antics made her come of as more like a caricature than a character. I think her best moments were her being down to earth, like when she was helping Justin clean up broken glass on the plane after his breakdown, etc. Her being ok with sharing the guy she likes with her friend was one thing, but now she really came of as going crazy like Cho. I can't tell to what extent this is her teasing Justin, and how much it's her getting weirder. It's not really a major issue, just something strange I picked up. Otherwise really great chapter!
Kolek
2024-06-12 17:03:03 +0000 UTCGreat chapter as always! The attack on Tony should motivate him to create more powerful tech. In addition, the Skrulls may pose a great threat to Hammer because I don’t think he knows meta knowledge about them. Finally, We have the army of Black Widow secretaries. And with Yelena’s training they will be the battle harem that Hammer deserves.
Dr.Flembo
2024-06-12 13:25:29 +0000 UTC
