HammerTime 20
Added 2024-05-22 07:46:59 +0000 UTCComments
Yeah I've been trying to be more descriptive because I usually don't describe the surroundings very well - but I think I overdid it hah.
JollyHippopotamus
2024-05-23 00:03:02 +0000 UTCGreat chapter as always! Ensuring a loyal AI was a great use for the mind control serum. In addition, Hammer needs a wizard ASAP or get some magical artifacts. Because, I don’t think he can entice a strong Magician easily. A questionably loyal sorcerer could be more dangerous. I also think the Egypt part was unnecessarily too descriptive. Lastly, I hope that Yelena wins the race.
Dr.Flembo
2024-05-22 22:26:14 +0000 UTCI said that same thing about Wanda for some reason JH is not really on board for some reason???
Jordan Lopez
2024-05-22 21:21:38 +0000 UTCLoved it! Though the first half, with the Egyptian style description, had a lot of repetitive sentences that could be cut down and, of course, the regular misspelling once in a while. Other than those, it was great. I don't really mind the story being harem or not, I am not really here for the smut, though it is a pleasant plus. Also, Justin needs to get his graby hands on Wanda to rectify his magician problems, plus she is morally flexible.
Raiden759
2024-05-22 19:16:52 +0000 UTC
