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Added 2024-04-24 08:21:23 +0000 UTCHere's the Tony Stark Interlude, I struggled a bit with this one for sure, let me know if it worked out alright or if I should think on changing anything.
Comments
He's going to make Justin's life slightly miserable
JollyHippopotamus
2024-04-25 11:46:37 +0000 UTCGreat chapter as always! Loved Tony’s POV, it showed his genius .
Dr.Flembo
2024-04-25 11:08:39 +0000 UTCAppreciate the feedback! And yeah, Hammer is a little stressed right now and coming off a bit mad, it will settle once he stops sulking over everything going wrong for once
JollyHippopotamus
2024-04-24 11:29:42 +0000 UTCI love seeing things from Tony's perspective! I think this is the best chapter of HammerTime so far! You should also be a little careful with Hammer. He is starting to look a little bit like a moustache twirling villain. Have him be a little bit ruthless a couple of times and reinforce the fact that he is a magnificent bastard.
Liima1
2024-04-24 11:17:57 +0000 UTC
